Ahh yes, the direct consequence of writing too many books in a row without breathing! I now have an endless list of editing jobs to get through! This is both good and bad. It’s good because it means more books moving closer to being publication ready. It’s also good news because I do kind of like editing…
It’s bad news because all this editing has to take priority and I am absolutely, unequivocally, not allowed to start writing any new books! It’s bad news because fresh new writing is without a doubt my favourite aspect of writing and I won’t be able to feel that again for a while. I do have some ideas for short stories based in the Black Hare Valley universe, however, so I will probably be able to satisfy the itch of writing with those and perhaps more essays and poems on Medium.
Below is the list of editing jobs I now need to focus on. As I write this, however, I have ticked the first one off. This morning I finished going through the edits for Black Hare Valley Book 1 from my editor. I will now send it to my Kindle for a final read through. I have also sent Black Hare Valley Book 2 to my Kindle and will tackle the fifth draft of that immediately after…
Yesterday, I also finished the Kindle edits of the book my writing clubs have written. I now need to amend those edits on the Word document before starting the process of setting the book up for publication.
Editing jobs:
Black Hare Valley Book 1 : 1996 – edits from my editor = DONE!
Something Happened in Lakeside View – a book my students have written, I am currently editing via a Kindle check through, then I’ll do final edits on the document
The Dark Finds You Part 3: second draft/read through edit to see what I actually wrote and determine if it is any good.
Black Hare Valley Book 2 : 1966 – this one now needs to be sent to my Kindle for draft 5/ read through/check edit
Black Hare Valley Books 3/4/5 : all also need to get sent to Kindle for draft 5/read through/check edit
The Dark Finds You Part 2: needs its sixth edit plus some changes I’ve recently decided to make, then it might be ready to go to the editor
The 7th Child – second draft/rewrite – I’ll get to this in a while but it will be more of a rewrite than a second draft so I am putting it off while the above takes priority!
Ugh, I feel tired just thinking about it all. But there is no point moaning! I did this to myself! And the sooner I get on with it, the sooner the books can all be published, the sooner I can start writing new ones!
rough cover idea for Black Hare Valley – image is mine
If you’re a regular reader here on my blog you will already know that I tend to juggle multiple writing projects at the same time. I cannot seem to just focus on one book until it is published and then start the next one. Instead, I’ll have one ‘priority’ book which is closest to being ready for release, one that is written and going through various edits and drafts, and usually one I am writing fresh…
This often proves to be a huge headache and mildly stressful but I’ve accepted it. I think I am mostly driven by a haunting fear of dying before I write and release all the books in my head. I’m just trying to get the job done.
Anyway, my most recent release was The Dark Finds You – a gritty crime thriller connected to lots of my other books. It was supposed to be the final book in a shared universe, a crossover book which would pull together and tie up various character’s storylines with a brand new plot.
That was all great until I started reading the paperback proof just to check it and suddenly got a whole new idea for a part two! I could not resist and ended up penning that book over Christmas. It’s now awaiting its sixth draft, and of course, part two led me to part three… The Dark Finds You has become a trilogy. So much for tying up that universe! I guess I just love these characters too much.
That led me to a dilemma. The next book due to be released after The Dark Finds You was Black Hare Valley Book 1. I had planned to release it on May 1st 2026 and then spread the 5 book series out over a year or two. But it suddenly felt weird, interrupting one now unfinished universe to introduce a brand new, and very different, universe.
So, I decided to delay releasing Black Hare Valley for now and concentrate on getting The Dark Finds You trilogy done. Part Three has just been finished in the first draft and I figured within a six to nine month period I could get them up to scratch and publish directly after The Dark Finds You.
That seemed to make sense!
But last weekend I had another wobble and found myself doubting that decision. And I think I have changed my mind again…
The reasons for doubting the decision are as follows:
I’ve really been missing Black Hare Valley! I think this was acerbated by book one coming back from my editor with lovely comments and not too much work to do re editing my end. I just kind of want to get stuck in now and get it done. I’ve been thinking about these characters and missing them. I am genuinely looking forward to doing the edits.
I’ve had various doubts about The Dark Finds You parts 2 and 3… I think it’s just because they’re still quite new. I’ve 99% happy with part 2 and about 80% happy with part 3, but I’ve only just finished the first draft, so that’s to be expected. Usually I do the second draft and like the book much more than I expect to. This is probably just a little confidence crisis, but it makes me want to go back to Black Hare Valley until I can figure it out…
Towards the end of the first draft of The Dark Finds You part 3 I started to slow down. I just wasn’t feeling it the way I wanted to and I am still not sure why. A reluctance to write is unusual for me and normally means something is not quite right somewhere and I just need to figure out what it is.
I wonder if it really matters what order I release them in? Black Hare Valley is nearly ready to go, so why wait? The Dark Finds You trilogy might now be trickier than I imagined to get right and I don’t know how long that will take.
So, with all that in mind, I think I have decided to postpone release of the rest of The Dark Finds You trilogy and just get going with Black Hare Valley instead. I am not sure yet whether I will release all five books in the series and then go back to The Dark Finds You, or whether I will go back and forth between the two very different worlds!
The fastest I have ever written a first draft is four weeks, which broke my previous record of six weeks. Now, these are the easy books – the ones that burst into your head fully formed and simply require some dedication and slightly unhinged addictive typing to get written. My average time to write a first draft is three months. It’s also important to point out that I am not one of those writers who edits as I go. I don’t. I rarely even read over what I wrote the day before. I just let it tumble out in a gloriously clumsy, scruffy, and undoubtedly ugly splurge. The real hard work, the editing and rewriting comes after and that can take me a few years!
But here’s how I get that first draft out of my head and into a book form.
Step 1: you need a notebook! Image is mine
Step 1: Yep, it’s as simple and as old-fashioned as that. I get a notebook and allocate it to the book idea. The ideas are crowding my head now and need to be written down. It won’t be particularly organised. Other than pages for character bios and plot ideas, the initial writing will be an outpouring of what has been building in my head. I highly recommend the notebook approach. I know its tempting to do it all online or on Word, or whatever you use, but there is something scary and clinical about that crisp fresh new document blinking back at you and it can feel intimidating, even impossible to get started. A notebook is far friendlier and you can carry it about with you. No one has to see it. It’s private, just for you. It’s a way in. An open door. Now, anything can happen.
Step 2: First page of notebook: ideas explosion! Image is mine
Step 2: The next thing that happens is an ideas explosion. Mind-maps or brainstorms are good too, but I like to just list my ideas and then later when chapters are being written I have the satisfying job of going back and ticking off what I’ve done. These ideas won’t be in order, by the way. And a lot of them won’t make it into the book. New ideas and sub-plots will inevitably muscle their way in too.
Step 3: chapter outlines! Image is mine
Step 3: The next step is chapter outlines. This is easier if the whole book has leapt into your head the way this one did in mine, but it can be achieved with less as well. I often find that starting chapter outlines gets me really far into the book, and often ends with me plotting the entire thing. Outlining one chapter, for example, very often leads you into the next.
Step 4: Start writing the book on your laptop. I prefer Word for many reasons. The notebook of chaos runs alongside the writing. The notebook is indeed now very chaotic! New chapters have pushed themselves in between the original chapter outlines, and I end up with circles and crosses and arrows all over the place. No one else would be able to make sense of it, but I can, and that’s all that matters. Why still use the notebook? Why use one at all? I’ve already mentioned my own reasons for writing a book this way but there has also been a lot of research lately that concludes that all our brain is active when we handwrite, whereas only part of our brain is active when writing on screens. In other words, writing by hand makes us think more! I often wonder if my books would be different if I planned, plotted, outlined and wrote all of it on the screen.
Step 5: Using the notebook of chaos to guide you, ticking things off, circling ideas, crossing things out, now, you write the book! And how do you do this? It’s easy. YOU JUST DO IT. I can’t explain it any better. You just sit down at the keyboard and write. You make a habit and stick to it. Go for walks when you get stuck. Keep going. One word at a time until it is done. There is no secret formula, no magic spell. YOU JUST WRITE IT.
Step 6: 2nd draft is the timeline edit! Image is mine
Step 6. The book is now written in the first draft. I go back to the start and read through and at the same time I make note of a timeline in the notebook. I should do this when I am writing the first draft but I nearly always neglect to. For me, the purpose of a second draft is to read through what just happened, as I often don’t remember, and to apply the timeline so there are no date based plot holes or inconsistencies. I will also make changes and amend typos etc if I see them.
Step 7: the third draft is the first rewrite! Image is mine
Step 7. The third draft is the first rewrite! By rewrite I mean that I’ve found plot holes or changed my mind about sub-plots, or have decided to cut down some POVs, or change something fairly major. This involves more actual writing rather than editing typos. This is more time consuming than the second draft but much quicker than the first!
Step 8: The fourth draft is the Kindle edit! Image is mine
Step 8 is what I call the Kindle edit. I’ve written the book, applied the correct timeline and rewritten bits I didn’t think worked. Now I need to step back and read it as a reader. I send it to my Kindle and with a notebook on the go to pick up typos, repetitive words etc, I get going. I am mostly assessing how the book reads. Is it too fast or too slow? Are there parts that are in any way repetitive? Are my characters nodding or shrugging too much? (Yes, they always are.) Are my characters well written? Is the dialogue realistic? I am highly critical when doing this edit. Mostly I want to assess how much I enjoy reading the book!
my kindle edit – image is mine
Step 9: The fifth draft happens next. I go back to Word and fix anything the Kindle edit picked up. This might be quick if everything went well, or it might involve another rewrite if I wasn’t happy with the book!
Step 10: What happens next? The sixth draft. Another Kindle edit. Another draft. Then off to my editor. Do the editor’s edits. And so on….
So, there you have it. And to summarise, my top tips for writing a book?
Hello everyone! I hope you have had a truly happy and peaceful holiday season and may I wish you a very happy New Year! My last post saw me checking the goals I set myself at the start of 2025 and exploring the reality of whether I met them or not! I failed two, achieved six, and half-achieved two, which I thought was pretty good.
So, let’s not hang about. What do I want to achieve in writing and in life in 2026?
Publish The Dark Finds You in January 2006! – This won’t be hard to achieve as the pre-order is already set up for the 9th January. I’m giving myself an easy start…
Start final/final edits for Black Hare Valley Book 1 and release it May 1st 2026: I really hope I achieve this as I want this book to be released on 1st May because May Day is a very important day in the Black Hare Valley universe! Book 1 is with my editor right now so fingers crossed…
Release another anthology written by the kids I work with – Not long after publishing The World You Gave Us, we launched another collaborative writing project where all the stories and poems had to be set in a strange town called Lakeside View. At the time of writing I am waiting for a handful of longer stories to come in and hope to have all editing and formatting done by the start of February…
Finish The Dark Finds You sequel – This should be easy. I am almost at the end of the first draft of the book that wasn’t meant to happen. I would like to get this ready to go to the editor in 2026 with a possible release date of autumn 2026…
Continue to edit/rework the rest of the Black Hare Valley series: At the moment I’m not sure how close I want to release each of the 5 books, so there is no major goal being set for publication after book 1… However, I do need to keep working on the rest of them and prioritise this series over everything else!
Start the rewrite of The 7th Child – I recently finished the first draft of this family mystery drama and hated it by the end. I know how to fix it though and it needs a major rewrite. I was all ready to dive into this when the sequel for The Dark Finds You suggested itself! However, I really want to start the rewrite at some point this year…
Continue to stick to Substack and make a few changes, and continue to stick with Medium: It’s always hard figuring out where and how to prioritise your time as a writer. Is it writing for other platforms that might make you money and/or improve your visibility? Or is just writing your own books? I’ve enjoyed both Medium and Substack in 2025 and I plan to stick with them with no particular pressure to do better. Just to have fun. I do have a few changes in mind for Substack though.
Have my best year in the garden ever!!: Oh, I hope so. This might be my most important goal actually. I have worked really hard through the autumn preparing the vegetable patch for the spring and summer and I feel more determined than ever to do really well. I also see it as an emergency. We can’t rely on governments to address or slow down climate change, or help us adapt to it! I am really concerned about rising food prices and food security in general. The best thing we can all do is at least grow something. I also plan to get more ducks and chickens, plant more fruit trees and bushes and lots more herbs!
Complete a reading challenge: I haven’t done one in ages but an author I know created one on Storygraph where you have to read a book starting with each letter of the alphabet. This seemed fun and simple so I signed up! Let’s hope I manage to complete the alphabet!
Get better at sketching: This is partly because I dearly want each chapter of each Black Hare Valley book to start with a small ink sketch and partly because I used to love drawing as a child and it’s been fun to reclaim it. I did basic drawings for the chapters I serialised but they all need to be much better for publication! I hope to find a good YouTube tutorial that will help me…
So, there you have it! A real mix of writing related and general life goals for 2026. I am so excited to get started! Do you have any hopes or dreams for the year ahead? Please feel free to share in the comments!
The Glorious Outsiders 