The Inspiration Behind Black Hare Valley Book One: 1996

My homage to Stephen King, echoes of ‘IT’ and bringing back maps and illustrations!

the paperback! Image is mine

It was about seven years ago when the idea for Black Hare Valley first presented itself to me, but back then, I only knew a few things about it. At the time, my eldest son was 12, and had recently dived into ‘IT’ by Stephen King. I was a similar age myself when I first discovered King. Having recently re-read the book (because it is one of my all time favourites), it became a topic of conversation between my son and I.

I told him I wanted to write a big chunk of a book set in a strange small town that seems quaint and peaceful on the surface but is anything but underneath… I wanted a group of misfit teenagers, a missing kid, and an undercurrent of fear and paranoia. That was about all I knew.

I think it was my son who suggested creating the town first and so one evening lying side by side on the lounge floor, we started creating a map on a long sheet of roll-out drawing paper. I’ve still got that map but it’s a bit scruffy these days. Years later I asked my son to recreate an A4 version and that is the neater one that appears at the front of the book.

We didn’t really have a plan. We added whatever felt natural: shops, schools, churches, petrol stations, hills, rivers, streams and woods… It was a lot of fun. Around that time I visited one of the iron age hill-forts we are lucky enough to have in our area and I was feeling very inspired by that too. I decided it should be a valley town, with one main road going through it and the town built up around that. On each side of the town would be sweeping hills and man-made hill-forts, or the remnants of. There would also be creepy woods, mysterious and ancient graves and ruins where the kids could hang out.

We had a lot of fun creating it and then that was it. I didn’t have anything else for the story yet but over the next three years, the characters started to grow in my head. Then in 2023 we had a five day power cut thanks to a storm, and even once the power came back on, we had two weeks without an internet connection.

It was on the first day of the power cut, sitting in the lounge with only the flames of the fire and some hastily strung up fairy lights to see by, that I suddenly knew how I would start the story of Black Hare Valley. A scene popped into my head. The group of teenagers were now fully formed and all had character bios in a notebook. I was working on loads of other books at the time, as I often am, and I wasn’t really meant to write it at all, but the power cut meant I couldn’t use my laptop, so I had no choice.

I picked up a notebook and started writing in longhand. That first scene was so real to me and had already played out in my head like a movie or an episode of a TV show. Jesse Archer, one of my main characters, lurking in an alley way waiting for his friends, who had agreed to help him set fire to the school. He would be interrupted and then arrested by Sergeant Aaron Mayfield and this scene would reveal a dark and mysterious relationship between the two of them.

Once I started writing I could not stop, and over the next three weeks the entire novel poured out of my pen and into several A4 notebooks. I wrote it every day, constantly. I’d be sitting in the car before work and writing. I’d be in the kitchen cooking dinner, and writing. And suddenly, it was done.

It then had to sit and be ignored while I went back to finishing off other projects.

Some time in 2024 I started typing it up and as I typed, I changed, deleted, and added to the book. I then knew there had to be another book, and before long I had a series on the go, which was not something I initially wanted! But the universe I had created just kept on growing and I could not have stopped it if I tried.

By this point I was fully in love with my main characters and heroes: Jesse, Willow, Jaime, Ralph and Paddy. And as I wrote each next book, more answers revealed themselves to me until one day I knew how it all ended, how it all tied up and who or what would ‘win’ in the end.

This book is a true labour of love, a homage to Stephen King’s ‘IT’ and a story about friendship, love, revenge and youth. It’s also a story steeped in folklore, from fairy rings and realms, to May Day traditions, shape-shifters, the green man, the hare, and much, more more.

I hope you’ve enjoyed reading about the inspiration behind it and don’t forget that at the moment the ebook is 99p to preorder from this link: https://books2read.com/u/4EO5DE

I will be back next Friday and the paperback link should be live by then!

See you next time!

The Children I Work With Have Published Another Book!

Something Happened In Lakeside View was written collaboratively by over 80 children!

Something Happened In Lakeside View is the result of over 80 children working together collaboratively to vote on a project, create a town, vote on a common theme and then all write their own stories or poems set there…

We started the project last summer term and all the pieces had been submitted by January. It is now available in ebook and paperback across multiple platforms.

Here is the blurb:

Welcome to Lakeside View, a pretty little town much like any other. Or is it?

Scratch under the surface and you will find a place full of secrets and shadows.

A place full of darkness, magic, ancient curses and hidden horrors. Who would live in a town like this? Many people have come and gone and some have left behind their testimonies.

What happened in Lakeside View? Read on to find out.

This is an anthology of stories and poems written by the young people who attend creative writing clubs with Chasing Driftwood Writing Group.

Don’t forget to leave a review on your platform of choice if you do read it. And please be aware this is a creepy horror-based book that might not be suitable for those under 10 or sensitive readers.

Many thanks!

A Week of Obsessive Editing

I just want it done!

cover for the anthology my students have written! Links coming soon! Image is mine

I blogged last week about the endless editing facing me after writing so many books and having them at various stages of drafts. This always seems to happen to me! I write and write and write, start new books when I have not yet published other books, and then at some point I inevitably end up with a lot of editing jobs… A seemingly endless list of books and projects to edit.

The thing is, I might just be as obsessive about editing as I am about writing. It has utterly consumed me this week and I’ve managed to tick off two of the biggest jobs I had.

Something Happened In Lakeside View is an anthology of connected short stories penned by the children I work with and this week I finished the final edits. I am now in the process of setting it up for publication and hopefully this time next week I will have buy links ready for anyone interested!

Here is the blurb by the way:

Welcome to Lakeside View, a pretty little town much like any other. Or is it?

Scratch under the surface and you will find a place full of secrets and shadows.

A place full of darkness, magic, ancient curses and hidden horrors. Who would live in a town like this? Many people have come and gone and some have left behind their testimonies.

What happened in Lakeside View? Read on to find out.

This is an anthology of stories and poems written by the young people who attend creative writing clubs with me at Chasing Driftwood Writing Group.

It felt like a huge weight had lifted when I declared that editing job done! In fact, the whole project has been very time consuming to put together so I should, in theory, have some more time on my hands for a bit.

The second big editing job was going through my editor’s edits on Black Hare Valley Book 1: 1996. I also got this done this week! I am now doing a final proofread/check through on my Kindle to mop up any lingering typos. Again, it feels like a weight has been lifted with that big job done.

These two books are priority for getting ready to publish or setting up to publish, so that will now take precedence over any other editing jobs I have. However, I am still slowly going through the second draft, or read-through draft, of The Dark Finds You Part 3. I still have a lot of misgivings about this one… But reading through and making little changes is helping me figure out the problems it might have!

So, on it goes… But at least the big ones are done for now!

When it comes to endless editing that just cannot be put off, I tend to just get my head down and crack on with it. I’ve had my Kindle with me at all times this week, so I have been editing in the car while I wait to go into work, and I have been editing in the evening, and then editing again before bed when normally I would be reading or watching TV. There’s simply no other way to get it done other than just get on with it!

An Endless Loop of Editing Begins!

Best just get on with it!

image is mine

Ahh yes, the direct consequence of writing too many books in a row without breathing! I now have an endless list of editing jobs to get through! This is both good and bad. It’s good because it means more books moving closer to being publication ready. It’s also good news because I do kind of like editing…

It’s bad news because all this editing has to take priority and I am absolutely, unequivocally, not allowed to start writing any new books! It’s bad news because fresh new writing is without a doubt my favourite aspect of writing and I won’t be able to feel that again for a while. I do have some ideas for short stories based in the Black Hare Valley universe, however, so I will probably be able to satisfy the itch of writing with those and perhaps more essays and poems on Medium.

Below is the list of editing jobs I now need to focus on. As I write this, however, I have ticked the first one off. This morning I finished going through the edits for Black Hare Valley Book 1 from my editor. I will now send it to my Kindle for a final read through. I have also sent Black Hare Valley Book 2 to my Kindle and will tackle the fifth draft of that immediately after…

Yesterday, I also finished the Kindle edits of the book my writing clubs have written. I now need to amend those edits on the Word document before starting the process of setting the book up for publication.

Editing jobs:

  • Black Hare Valley Book 1 : 1996 – edits from my editor = DONE!
  • Something Happened in Lakeside View – a book my students have written, I am currently editing via a Kindle check through, then I’ll do final edits on the document
  • The Dark Finds You Part 3: second draft/read through edit to see what I actually wrote and determine if it is any good.
  • Black Hare Valley Book 2 : 1966 – this one now needs to be sent to my Kindle for draft 5/ read through/check edit
  • Black Hare Valley Books 3/4/5 : all also need to get sent to Kindle for draft 5/read through/check edit
  • The Dark Finds You Part 2: needs its sixth edit plus some changes I’ve recently decided to make, then it might be ready to go to the editor
  • The 7th Child – second draft/rewrite – I’ll get to this in a while but it will be more of a rewrite than a second draft so I am putting it off while the above takes priority!

Ugh, I feel tired just thinking about it all. But there is no point moaning! I did this to myself! And the sooner I get on with it, the sooner the books can all be published, the sooner I can start writing new ones!