Black Hare Valley: Chapter Twenty-Seven “Ralph and The Raven”

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1

Jesse wakes up in confusion. He is lying on his back in the bed at Hill Fort farm. But he has no idea how he got back there. Groggy, he props himself up on one elbow and examines himself. He’s wearing the same clothes he had on when he got to the old church but he has no memory of returning. He presses a hand to his forehead where a nasty headache is brewing and a slideshow of images fills his mind.

Running. So much running. Suddenly, he can hear his heart beating in his ears again. He squints and groans. Running faster. Grass and hills. The church. What made him go there? Why were the others there? What were they doing?

The black hare…

Jesse springs upright, lowering his hand and gazing around in a panic. He saw it, the black hare. He chased it. He wanted it. The smell, the scent, the blood. Hunger. Running, running, running. Teeth. Escape. He shakes his head – after that, he has nothing.

A knock on the door alarms him. Margaret never knocks. Jesse moves to the end of the bed and lowers his feet to the floor. His throat is tight and dry and his stomach is rolling over in hunger.

‘Who is it?’ he asks, his voice a thin croak.

The door handle turns slowly and time seems to slow down as the door swings open, revealing Hilda in her wheelchair, Horatio at her side.

‘Horatio is not much of a dog,’ she states flatly, her eyes shooting around his room. She has a tray on her lap and what looks like a sandwich in the middle of it. Jesse swallows, licking his lips.

‘What?’

Hilda rolls herself slowly in. She ignores his question and gazes around the room. Seemingly satisfied, she holds out the tray and Jesse takes it nervously. His hands shake as he rests it on his knees. The sandwich looks divine. Thick white bread, corned beef, lettuce and tomato. He stares at it longingly.

‘Thanks.’

‘She said you’d be hungry.’ Hilda is turning her chair around. ‘She’s gone to town.’

‘What time is it?’

‘Lunchtime,’ says Hilda, glancing over her shoulder. ‘Saturday,’

Jesse’s jaw drops. Saturday? He leans forward. ‘Wait. Did you say Saturday? It’s Thursday.’

‘It was Thursday,’ yawns Hilda. ‘Then it was Friday. Now, it is Saturday. Come on, Horatio.’

‘No, wait! Please!’ Jesse places the tray behind him and gets up. He feels sick for a dizzying moment, light-headed as the room swims around him. He holds his head. ‘I’ve been asleep since Thursday? No way.’

Yes way,’ is Hilda’s terse reply. She still won’t look at him, he notices. But he looks at her. He sees a small woman in a child’s body – her clothes young, her face old. She’s supposed to be a decade younger than Margaret but as Jesse looks at her now, he thinks she looks older. Her wrinkles are deeper, the skin on her neck saggier. It’s almost impossible to tell what goes on behind those eyes but Jesse can’t help feeling that she’s been trying to tell him something.

‘How did I get here then?’ he demands. ‘Last I remember, I was in the old church with my friends.’

‘Yeah, they brought you,’ Hilda replies, her eyes on the dog. ‘They helped you back here.’

‘Why don’t I remember? What the hell was in that drink they gave me? It did something, didn’t it?’

Hilda releases a dramatic sigh. ‘Not supposed to ask questions.’

‘And you’re not supposed to tell me things, but you did. Didn’t you, Hilda?’ He steps closer and she glances up nervously. Is she afraid of him? He stops where he is and holds out his hands. ‘You told me that Horatio isn’t a dog and Margaret isn’t your sister. What the hell does that mean?’

Hilda arches her lip, her eyes now fixed on her lap. She rolls herself a little closer to the door. ‘You know about the boy. The hare,’ she says after a beat. Jesse nods. ‘Then you know about Horatio,’ she sighs, her gaze shifting to the Labrador’s dozy face. He’s sniffing around her lap trying to snuffle up sandwich crumbs.

Jesse steps closer again. ‘He’s not a dog. Shit.’ He presses both hands to his head. ‘Shit. Shit. Like Paddy. When? When did it happen?’

‘I don’t know,’ she grumbles, with another eye roll. ‘Don’t ask me.’

‘But I need to know. You have to tell me, Hilda. Horatio was a missing kid too? Is that what you’re saying?’ His mind is spinning when an awful thought occurs to him. ‘Jesus, he’s not my mum, is he? Or my aunt? They both went missing!’

A shrill and childish laugh escapes Hilda. ‘He’s a boy, stupid!’

‘Whose boy? Whose? Where did he come from?’ Jesse closes the distance between them and puts his hands on the arms of her chair, trapping her. ‘You have to tell me. You can’t just drop that and not expect me to ask more!’

‘It’s not important who he is,’ she mutters, eyes burning into the floor.

‘Yes, it is! If he was someone’s kid!’

‘He was never a puppy…’ she hisses. ‘He was… grown-up.’

‘Why can’t he change back? Like the committee? Like Mayfield? Hilda, please!’

‘I don’t know.’ She crosses her arms tightly and glances at the window, panicked by the sound of wheels on gravel. ‘She’s back. She’s never gone for long.’

‘Please tell me,’ he begs. ‘Please.’

‘I don’t know. They don’t tell me anything.’

‘Then how do you know about him?’

‘I listen. I wait. I pick stuff up.’ She unfolds her arms and grips the wheels. Jesse lets go and she rolls forward. They hear the front door open and he knows he has to let her go. She wheels away silently, head bowed, Horatio at her side.

Jesse closes the door and paces back to the bed. He sits down and devours the sandwich in seconds. It’s only when the plate is clear that he sees the folded note poking out from under it. Quickly, listening out for Margaret, he reads the note:

Jesse – you passed out. Sick! You made us take you to Margaret’s. You said you were close but we’re worried. You were not like you! We need to see you ASAP. Find a way, They are trying to change you – Willow, Ralph and Jaime.

2

Jaime watches Mark passing the first crate to the delivery driver, then creeps back up the stairs and closes her bedroom door behind her. She goes to the window and waves at Ralph who is lingering outside the shop opposite. He gives a wave to show that he has seen the signal. Then he starts to move. She watches breathlessly as Ralph crosses the road, walks past the pub and turns left into Lupin Lane. He is out of sight and Jaime has no knowing if his part of the plan worked or not.

3

Ralph arrives at Lupin Lane just in time to see the first crate being loaded into the waiting van. He ducks back and waits. Shaking and unable to believe he is actually doing this, Ralph watches until he is satisfied the van is loaded with enough crates for him to hide behind.

As the driver returns to the pub for more, Ralph hares down the road and flings himself into the back of the stationary van. He scuttles quickly behind the stacked crates. He’s clutching his bicycle helmet tightly in both hands and he curls himself over it, closing his eyes and holding his breath as footsteps approach.

The van dips as another heavy crate is loaded and then the doors slam shut and Ralph is in darkness. He opens his eyes and sits up, huddled against the back of the van. He’s breathing fast now, hands shaking slightly as he holds onto the helmet, his only protection.

Shit, he thinks, picturing Jaime’s face; I’m gonna need more.

The engine starts and music blares, making Ralph jump. It’s that Spaceman song he keeps hearing everywhere, one that gets in your head and won’t get out. He closes his eyes again, a small yelp escaping as the van starts to move. Ralph cannot believe he is doing this. Alone. Willow had offered to come but he’d refused. She needed to put her own plan into action.

Ralph folds his arms around his knees and tries to prepare himself.

4

‘You ought to take a break now,’ Willow’s mother says to her from the till where she is sipping a fresh cup of tea. ‘Before it gets busy again. It always gets busy after lunch.’

Willow turns the jewellery stand around another rotation, her eyes fixing firmly on the one she wants. A silver dagger on a black cord. She slips it from the hook then conceals it up the sleeve of her shirt.

‘Okay, I’ll go for a walk then,’ she tells her mother, slipping behind the till to retrieve her cloak. She nods at the pile of neatly wrapped gifts in a box beside the till. ‘Are these orders?’

‘Yes, waiting to be picked up.’

‘Could I deliver any? On my walk?’

Her mother eyes her curiously but nods. ‘Sure. Go for it. Take as many as you like, They’re all addressed.’

‘I will.’ Willow selects four gifts and drops them into a large gift bag. ‘I won’t be long.’

‘Thanks, love.’

Willow pauses at the door. ‘Mum?’

‘Yes, love?’ Her mother lowers her mug of tea.

‘I gave those photos to Jesse to show his dad, is that okay?’

Her mother looks uncertain; her lips parting then closing again as a troubled frown wrinkles her brow. Then she recovers with a nervous smile and pushes her hair behind her ears. ‘Yes, of course, that’s fine.’

‘And you still don’t remember hanging out with Nick Archer? Or Frankie Maxwell?’ Willow asks softly. ‘It’s okay if you don’t, Mum. Sometimes I think this town sort of sings people to sleep, you know.’ She laughs at herself, lowering her gaze. ‘I don’t know.’

‘I do know,’ her mother replies and when Willow looks up she is sure she can see tears in her eyes. ‘I think you might be right. It’s like I don’t want to remember, but I don’t even know why I don’t want to, or why I can’t. Does that make sense?’

Willow nods. It breaks her heart but she gets it.

‘I just know that it’s better that I don’t,’ her mother adds softly, looking down.

Willow nods before slipping out the back way. She starts to skirt swiftly around the outskirts of town. She delivers the packages one by one to four surprised and grateful customers. Willow saves the dagger necklace for Hill Fort Farm.

5

Jaime checks the library first. It’s empty except for two elderly ladies perusing the romance section in a wobbly manner. Eugenie Spires peers over the rim of her spectacles and raises her eyebrows.

‘Can I help you, dear?’

‘Just looking for my friend.’ Jaime fakes a smile and backs out again just as quickly.

Her heart racing, Jaime doesn’t really know what she is doing. This is not a plan; nothing they agreed upon anyway. But she couldn’t sit still and do nothing; not while Willow is on her way to Jesse and Ralph is risking life and limb trespassing on Bob Rowan’s land.

Her mother had complained of a headache so Jaime had offered to pop out and pick up her prescription. She hadn’t thought twice; it was just an opportunity to get out of the pub and away from Mark’s accusing gaze.

A quick trip around town, she’d thought, get away from Mark and help out Mum and get time to think, because it’s been increasingly hard to think inside the pub. Jaime is relieved the investigation is no longer stashed there. The pressure had been keeping her awake at night and she certainly doesn’t need any more reasons for Mark to distrust her. But even with it gone, the atmosphere there makes clear thought almost impossible. The pub, she has realised, is a focal point for the town. There is another, of course, the ill-reputed Old Fort, a place frequented by the likes of Jesse Archer’s father. But almost everyone else goes to the Hare and Hound at some point every week. Mark is proud of this. The heart of the community, he often says, while the church is the soul.

Jaime isn’t sure about any of that but she does know the pub is constantly rammed with people, morning to night. Everyone knows Mark and Mark knows everyone. It’s like that in small towns, he likes to remind her.

But out here, in the fresh air, where everything still smells like the earth after rain, Jaime can finally think clearly. She checks the library for Nathan Cotton who she knows frequents it as much as her but then outside, remembers the other place he can usually be found and quickly diverts to the chemist.

Of course; why didn’t she think of it sooner? Because thinking rationally is so hard in that damn pub. It’s a circus, day and night. But maybe somewhere at the back of her mind she had known.

She pushes open the door and there he is. Reading a magazine behind the counter; a magazine he quickly stuffs under the counter when she walks in, his cheeks reddening.

‘Hi!’ He looks pleased to see her, so she smiles back warmly.

‘Hi, Nathan, how are you?’

‘Pretty good thanks. How can I help you?’

‘I just need my mum’s prescription.’ Jaime rests her arms on the counter in a casual manner that she hopes indicates there is no need to rush. ‘It might not be ready though, she said.’

‘I’ll check for you. Catherine Aster, right?’

‘Yep, thanks.’

Nathan trots around the back and she can see the top of his head bent over a few shelves whilst murmuring to Mr Martin, the pharmacist. Nathan returns, shrugging apologetically.

‘You’re right, it’s not ready but Mr Martin is making it up for you now. Can you hang on a few minutes? It shouldn’t take long.’

‘No problem.’ Jaime flashes her sweetest grin. ‘I can wait.’

‘Cool.’ Nathan returns to his stool but does not retrieve his magazine from under the counter. He smiles guiltily instead.

‘So how are you?’ Jaime asks. ‘You and your family?’

He sighs and examines his hands. ‘Oh, you know. Okay, I suppose. Thank you for asking.’

‘There’s been no news, I suppose?’

‘Great-Grandma? No.’ He shakes his head. ‘Nothing. Mum says not to expect any. She says it was a long time coming.’

‘Really? That’s so sad.’

‘Yeah, but she was super, super old.’

Jaime nods in sympathy. ‘It must be hard not knowing for sure.’

‘She was always vanishing,’ says Nathan. ‘Mum says even when she was a kid. There one minute, gone the next. Never knew how long she’d be gone for.’

‘Where do you think she went?’

Nathan shrugs. ‘No clue. If she went off, you could never find her. Just had to wait for her to come back on her own.’

‘Wow. So, you never knew where she went or what she did?’

‘Nah. Just figured she went off into the woods, the hills, you know. She really liked it out there. Just needed to be alone, I guess.’

‘And what was the longest she’d be gone for?’ Jaime asks, then, seeing a slight frown on his face, she adds hastily, ‘I’m sorry. I’m so nosy. I should shut up. I want to be a journalist one day and once I get asking…’ She laughs at herself. ‘I’m sorry, Nathan.’

‘No, no, not at all.’ He reassures her with a smile, ‘The answer is, I don’t know. A few weeks maybe? Here and there.’

Jaime nods and decides she might as well brave one more question. She can see Mr Martin sealing the paper bag with her mother’s prescription in. ‘What was she like, Nathan? What sort of person was Iris?’

‘Hard to say.’ Nathan glances at the ceiling and rubs his chin as if thinking. ‘Eccentric mostly, I guess. Old-fashioned. In her own world, really. I’d have liked to get to know her better but my mum always said not to expect to.’

‘Really? Why not?’

‘Said she didn’t like children.’ He shrugs again.

Jaime lets a nervous laugh escape. ‘But she had a family, she had you..?’

‘Yeah I know. But I can vouch for it. She wasn’t mean or anything, but Mum was right. She really didn’t care for children.’

‘Was it your mum’s mum or dad…?’

‘Her dad,’ nods Nathan. ‘He didn’t stick around when my nan was expecting Mum though.’

‘Oh? He left town? Iris’s only child left Black Hare Valley?’

‘Never to be seen again,’ Nathan smiles and shrugs. ‘My nan brought my mum up on her own until she died of cancer when my mum was, I dunno, I think about eighteen? She didn’t have a lot to do with Iris, I don’t think.’

‘Oh, I see. I’m sorry, Nathan. Not exactly happy families then, hey?’

‘No, I guess not.’

‘Catherine Aster?’ Mr Martin shuffles into sight, squinting behind his thick glasses and holding out the paper bag.

Jaime wishes she had more time with Nathan but she knows it would be risky to keep questioning him. She takes the bag, thanks them both and leaves.

6

Ralph has been bumped about long enough to know they are now on Rowan land and he has the bruises to prove it. The van has finally come to a stop. Ralph freezes, listening. The music stops and a van door slams. He curls into a ball and holds his breath. He thinks to himself, what is the worst that can happen? The driver finds him, shouts a bit and then sends him on his way? But what if the driver is one of them? What if he is caught and handed over? Changed in some way? What if they hand him over to the police? What if he ends up alone with Mayfield?

Ralph’s mouth is paper dry and his pulse is roaring in his head when the doors are slid open and sunlight fills the van. He feels footsteps walking away, crunching on loose gravel. Ralph knows he has to move now. He can’t risk missing his chance or getting shut in the van again. Breathless, almost sick with nerves, he forces himself to move. He slides over to the doors and lowers his feet to the ground, before climbing slowly and cautiously out of the van.

When nothing happens he peers around the door and sees the Rowan farmhouse looming ahead at the end of a scruffy gravel drive, overgrown with weeds. It is surrounded by long grass, stinging nettles and unkempt hedges. Huge oak trees circle it and beyond them, nothing but deep dark woods.

Ralph shivers and looks around. Seeing no one, he starts to move, heading left to where a rusty red tractor is stationed. He slips behind it, hidden in cold shadows to wait.


7

Willow approaches the farm under a dark and turbulent sky. It looks like bruises spreading out across the horizon, slowly but surely creeping closer to Black Hare Valley. The clouds are blooming, she thinks, swollen and pregnant with the promise of yet more rain. Summer in Black Hare Valley is not a given, she thinks. Weather can, and will, go either way.

Willow wonders; how close will Margaret allow her to get? A cold wind whips viciously across the fields and Willow’s cloak drifts out to either side, briefly illuminating her slim dark frame, before she tugs it together and hurries on, eyes fixed ahead on Hill Fort House.

A large bird arrives, circling above her as she approaches the drive. Margaret’s car is there and Willow can see the light from the open front door. She curries on, casting a watchful eye on the hovering bird, then she sees that it is Hilda at the door. She wheels herself backwards to allow Willow an entrance, almost running over a drowsy Horatio as she does.

Willow stands there, blinking in silence for what feels like forever. She suddenly has no words, and barely any thoughts. A roll of thunder shatters the silence and Hilda wheels forward to swing the door shut with a bang,

‘Are you here to see stupid?’ she asks, wheeling around to face Willow, who nods instantly, mouth hanging open. ‘I gave him your note. He’s out the back.’ Hilda points to the conservatory attached to the library. ‘On the patio.’

‘I’ve got a delivery for him.’ Willow finally remembers her voice but Hilda is not interested. She looks away and wheels herself towards the kitchen with the dog in tow. Willow turns slowly, mystified, before marching stiffly into the library. There are no lights on and its dim and shadowy as she makes her way across to the French doors. One is ajar so she slips through and follows the small orange glow in the rose garden.

Willow clears her throat and walks quickly over to join Jesse. The clouds have thickened and the quality of light is poor. Jesse is perched on the edge of the patio, smoking a cigarette. He looks up as Willow joins him and she sees pure confusion in his eyes. He is pale and clammy, his fingers trembling as they tap ash from the cigarette onto the grass.

‘She lets you smoke?’ Willow can’t help smiling. His gaze shifts to the cigarette and his shoulders lift and drop in a small tight shrug. ‘I can’t believe she let me in. Hilda, I mean. Where’s Margaret?’

Jesse looks up. The large bird, a buzzard, Willow thinks, is still circling above them, slowly and lazily as if it has nowhere else to go.

‘You gave Hilda that note? Bit risky.’

Willow swallows and looks back at Jesse. She digs into her cloak and retrieves her last package. ‘I know. I hope she didn’t show anyone else. This was my cover,’ she tells him, pushing it onto his lap. ‘I was going to say you’d ordered it from the shop. You might as well have it.’

Jesse pulls on the cigarette one last time then flicks the butt away. He unwraps the package carefully, his eyes clearing suddenly, his face losing the tension. He lifts the necklace out by the cord and allows the silver dagger to dangle in front of his face. A small smile brightens his features.

‘This is cool.’

‘Yeah, it is. Jesse?’ Willow looks down at her hands clasped between her knees. She feels a drop of rain splatter onto her head. ‘Do you remember what happened that night at the church?’

He drops his hands between his legs and releases a juddering sigh. ‘No.’

Willow feels a surge of relief. Before she can stop herself she turns to him and takes one of his hands into her own.

‘It’s okay, Jesse,’ she tells him softly, leaning closer. ‘She wants you and she’s trying to change you. I think we need to get you out of here.’

He doesn’t nod or shake his head. He stares into her eyes, then licks his lips and says, ‘It was a drink they gave me.’ There is a slow shock building behind his eyes and Willow waits, giving a tiny nod to encourage him on. ‘It did something to me. But I should stay here… The more she trusts me, the more I can learn.’

‘It doesn’t matter.’ Willow squeezes his hands. ‘We can’t undo what they’ve done. We spoke to Paddy, to the hare, at the church before you ran in. He’s been saving us again and again but he’s not safe from them and he can’t ever be Paddy again.’

Willow waits while he tries to absorb this news. There is nothing but pain and confusion in his face. She glances up as the bird of prey cries out suddenly – a shrill, haunting call. She shudders and squeezes his hand again.

‘I had to see you.’

Jesse nods but does not answer. His eyes are fixed on the small silver dagger pendant.

‘We’ve got some plans,’ Willow hisses at him. ‘But I think we really need to get you out. You could go back to the treehouse. You’d be safe there.’ When he does not reply, Willow leans closer, until their heads are pressed together. ‘Jesse, if you can do it, please go to the treehouse. If you get the chance, okay? Paddy is there. You’ll both be safe while we figure it all out. Because there has to be an answer, Jesse, there just has to be.’

Jesse finally meets her eye, draws in his breath and gives a firm nod. Willow breathes out in relief and lets go of his hand. She tugs her cloak closer as the rain falls harder.

‘I better go. We’ll see you soon, okay?’

He nods. Willow forces herself to move when all she really wants to do is grab his hand and drag him with her. But the bird is circling and the lights are on in the house that looms behind them.

She walks quickly away against all her instincts, and does not look back.

8

Ralph doesn’t know how long he’s been hiding behind the tractor but it feels like forever. It’s raining steadily and the plumy low clouds have darkened considerably. Bob Rowan is there by the van with the delivery driver, a short burly man with a grey baseball cap on. They’re chatting – perhaps Bob Rowan is relaying his next order, or perhaps a dissatisfaction with this one – but he keeps looking over at the tractor.

The knowledge that he has been spotted or sensed somehow, drips through Ralph like cold cement until he starts to fear he is going to heave. But Ralph reminds himself sharply that he is here to speak to Mr Rowan. This is all going to plan. Despite how close to vomiting he is.

The van door slams and Ralph jumps dramatically and bites down a scream. He peers out long enough to see the van driving away and that Bob Rowan has disappeared from sight. Ralph allows himself to breathe out slowly, steadying himself and willing the nausea away.

Then suddenly he is surrounded by black feathers fluttering madly against his face, and a terrible dark scream fills the air. Ralph staggers backwards, yelping and gasping and batting with his hands. He trips and falls on his backside, looking up long enough to see a huge black raven flapping directly above his face. Ralph screams and scrambles back until his spine presses against the trunk of one of the huge gnarly oaks.

The bird dives in, black feet and talon like claws stretching towards Ralph’s face. He lowers his head, pulls up his knees and wraps himself into a tight ball. The claws strike the helmet again and again, soft black feathers filling the air as the raven’s wings bat rapidly up and down.

Ralph shrinks in on himself – safe in the knowledge that the helmet is protecting him – then he yelps in pain when the claws rake across his knees. He had thought to wear thick jeans and chunky walking boots along with a wool-lined duffel coat. It still hurts, despite the padding.

‘Stop it!’ he barks behind his arms. ‘Stop it! I know who you are! Just stop it!’

The raven squawks at him and continues to try to gouge his flesh. He feels a sharp slicing pain in his wrist when the bird’s beak finds exposed skin.

Ralph reaches out in desperation, lifting his head long enough to stare right into the demented white eyes of the bird – whilst his hands grab and slip and grab again, finally closing around the wing feathers.

Ralph cries out with the effort to contain it but he has it and he forces the bird down onto the damp ground. It twists and flaps and squawks furiously, but he’s on his knees leaning over it and putting his weight onto it.

‘Stop it!’ he shouts angrily. ‘Just stop it Bob Rowan! I just want to talk! And I’m not leaving until we do!’

Ralph feels a shift under his hands. The soft silky feathers seem to contract inwards as if shrinking away from his touch. He stares dumbly but darkness fills his vision, feathers beating and rustling and fluttering in his face. Ralph backs off, raising his arms and closing his eyes for the briefest moment.

When he opens them again he is staring at Bob Rowan. The dark-haired sturdy looking man is standing over him, breathless, his eyes burning with cold malice.

Ralph gulps and uses the tree to help him to his feet. He realises then that despite everything he still can’t fathom how any of this is possible. Rewind a few weeks and Ralph had no idea such sinister and impossible things happened in his town. He presses himself back into the thick rough bark and gulps cold air.

Bob Rowan examines him – looks him up and down then licks his lips. ‘You got a death wish?’ he snaps suddenly, stepping forward. ‘Is that it?’

‘No,’ Ralph shakes his head. ‘No, I haven’t.’

Rowan steps closer, his low round head jutting viciously forward. ‘You must have!’ he snarls, spittle flying from his thick lips and splattering Ralph’s face. ‘Sneaking on my land! Did you think I wouldn’t smell you or hear you the second that van arrived? I knew that van had a visitor in it, you stupid little shit. Do you think they don’t know too? Of course they do! They know every little move you miserable lot make!’

He steps back finally, glaring at Ralph, who lifts his hands warily and drags them across his face. ‘They,’ he manages to utter. ‘The committee? They? You’re not one of them, are you?’

Rowan’s eyes drift away. His face shuts down and he turns away abruptly, lifting and dropping his broad shoulders in a dramatically sulky shrug. He starts to move away, muttering to himself, ‘Get off my land…’

Ralph leaves the tree and follows.

‘Mr Rowan? You were happy Iris was killed. You pecked at her and the mayor, she shooed you away like she hated you. That must mean something. You’re like them but you’re not one of them.’

‘Oh, aren’t you a clever clogs?’ Rowan sneers at him sideways.

‘We’re right,’ Ralph asserts. ‘And they changed Paddy. Others too. But Paddy is stuck like that, isn’t he? It’s different for him and he’s in danger. We’re all in danger, Mr Rowan.’

‘Leave well alone then.’

‘We can’t do that.’

‘Why?’

‘Why? Because Paddy is our friend. We have to save him. And Jesse too – the mayor is trying to change him, isn’t she? We want our friends back. Safe.’

Rowan chuckles darkly. ‘No chance, lad. Too late.’

‘Was it you?’ Ralph asks suddenly. He stops walking. ‘Was it you that tried to warn Paddy?’

Bob Rowan growls again and turns to face him. He looks him up and down again. ‘You need to go, sunshine, right now. You, those others, they’re no match for what’s out there. You should know that by now.’

Ralph agrees but he can’t stop now, he can’t have gone through all this for nothing. He has to take something back. He has to. He steadies himself and stands tall.

‘You’re right,’ he nods. ‘We don’t understand any of this, not really, but we’re trying and we’re not afraid, Mr Rowan. We have to save our friends.’

‘Too late I told you,’ Rowan shakes his head solemnly. Ralph wonders if he can detect regret in the old man’s eyes. ‘They’re too strong,’ he adds. ‘Too old. Ancient, they are. You’re meddling with ancient… things, boy. Things you don’t understand.’

‘Help me understand,’ Ralph begs him. ‘Even if we don’t stand a chance. Please. Tell us it’s hopeless if it is, but please tell us so we can decide for ourselves.’

Bob Rowan stares back at Ralph, into Ralph, for what feels like a very long time. His eyes, though surrounded by wrinkles, are incredibly bright and sharp. Curious, even. Then, he wrinkles his nose and looks away.

‘Mayfield is the problem,’ he says in a low voice, almost a whisper. ‘He’s the danger.’

Ralph swallows thickly. He feels cold suddenly, drenched in a creeping icy panic.

‘Mayfield is her mistake,’ Rowan goes on. ‘He’s her regret. She hates him and Mayfield – along with being a bloodthirsty sadistic killer, is a spy. A blackmailer. A spy with power over every single person in this town, even if they don’t know it yet.’

Bob Rowan steps back. His head is low on his burly shoulders. He looks weary and old, the light in his eyes dimming.

Ralph stares at him, a deep and dark realisation pouring over him, suffocating him with its gruesome obviousness – He licks his dry lips and says to Bob Rowan,

‘We’ve got to kill Mayfield.’

The old man nods. Yes.

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Black Hare Valley: Chapter Twenty-Six “Bloodlust”

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1

Something lingers…

It’s in his mouth, between his teeth, coating his tongue, but as Jesse wakes groggily on his bed at Hill Fort Farm, he can’t place it or name it. The dream, if that’s what it was, drifts away in fragments. He sits up, head in hands and witnesses it breaking up inside his head. A road. Darkness. The valley walls looming over him. Running. Chasing. Hunting?

Jesse drops his hands into his lap and lets his head fall back, eyes closed as the pain in his head rages on. And the taste… something clinging to the insides of his mouth, something earthy, yet metallic…

The door opens suddenly, jolting him from his thoughts. It’s Margaret, marching in with her shoulders back and her head held high. She walks and moves like she has a broom stuck down her clothes, he thinks, blinking slowly as his sluggish body begins to awaken.

There is nothing sluggish about Margaret as she sweeps rapidly through the room, throwing open the thick curtains and letting the morning sun stream across the varnished floorboards. Jesse grunts and puts his hands back over his face. Suddenly, she is there, leaning over him, slapping a hand across his forehead.

‘How do you feel? You were out of it for some time.’

She sounds sharp, he thinks, lowering his hands to look at her, sharp and stern. Did he do something wrong? He thinks back, frowning – the memory of the dark stuffy drawing room and the committee watching him frozen in his chair, returns shakily. He remembers the drink… and then the dream… It comes back to him again in scattered images. Running on the road, racing after something, some small creature.

He runs his tongue around his mouth. It feels claggy and dry and that taste; like bits of meat have got stuck between his teeth….

‘Not great,’ he tells her, his shoulders sagging.

‘Sick?’ she snaps. ‘You were sick last night.’

‘Was I?’

‘You don’t remember?’

He shakes his head glumly. He has no memory of throwing up. He glances at his clothes curiously.

‘What about now? Do you feel sick still?’

He nods listlessly. ‘My head hurts.’

‘I’ll keep you off school,’ she says and part of him is relieved, part of him dismayed. He needs to see the others. But he nods obediently and Margaret narrows her eyes at him. ‘Get some rest. Catch up on schoolwork. It’s important you apply yourself and make something of your life. You see that now, don’t you?’

He nods. ‘Margaret?’

‘You don’t want to end up like the rest of your family,’ she goes on. ‘This is your chance to be different, remember?’

‘I remember, but Margaret, I don’t…’ He frowns, scratching his head, swallowing again to get rid of the foul tang in his mouth.

‘Don’t what?’

He looks at her helplessly. ‘What happened? That drink?’

‘That drink was myself and the committee placing a tiny bit of trust in you, Jesse. That drink was a glimpse – you wanted to know, didn’t you? You wanted to know everything and you will, if you continue to please us. But it can’t be rushed so we gave you a glimpse. What did you see?’

‘I don’t know,’ he whispers, staring up at her fearfully.

She stares back, hands on hips, her body rigid, her demeanour excited yet impatient. He fears her greatly – he feels she could eat his very soul – but at the same time he feels closer to her than ever before. He wants to reach out and touch her. He needs to understand.

‘Tell me what you remember,’ she commands coldly. ‘Everything. And your brothers won’t get that visit we talked about last night. You’d like that, wouldn’t you? If we left them alone?’

Jesse swallows and nods. ‘I was running,’ he tells her. ‘Really fast. Faster than I can run… I don’t think I was me.’

‘Do you know what you were?’

He shakes his head sadly. ‘No, I don’t know. But I was fast. I was running down the high street after something.’

She leans closer. ‘Did you see what it was?’

‘A creature, maybe something small. Fast. But not as fast as me.’

‘Interesting. Did you catch up with it?’

‘Nearly. But then I woke up…’

She nods. ‘Did you want to catch up to it?’

‘Yeah. I did.’ He watches her, wondering if this is what she wants to hear.

‘What did you want to do to it?’

‘I don’t know.’ Jesse shrugs weakly. He can tell instantly that she does not believe him. She tilts her head, eyebrows raised; her don’t try to fool me face. He says, ‘I wanted to kill it. Catch it, tear it to pieces.’

Finally, Margaret moves away with a small chuckle. ‘All right. Well done, Jesse. I appreciate your honesty. You must understand we placed great trust in you last night. You’ll keep this to yourself. You’ll think of your brothers, won’t you?’

He nods and she smiles slowly.

‘A predator, eh? Ha. Aaron will be fuming.’ She turns at the door. ‘I’ll bring you something to eat. In the meantime, rest.’

He wants to call out, to stop her, ask her a million questions – but her can’t bring himself to – he’s too weak, too groggy and confused. Instead, Jesse falls back onto the bed and closes his eyes. His mouth fills with the taste of blood and his stomach heaves.

2

Jaime sits on her bed, listening to the rain pattering against the windows. The pub is quiet, not open yet – but she knows Mark will already be downstairs, setting up, sorting orders and doing whatever else needs to be done. Staff will be arriving soon.

Jaime dresses in a lethargic manner, her eyes fixed and glassy as she buttons up her school shirt and cardigan. She checks her face in the mirror and winces. The scabs looks nasty and the skin around them inflamed.

She sighs and looks away. Before going downstairs, Jaime gently pushes her mum’s door open. She can just make out her shape under the duvet and her gentle snores drift across the room. Jaime closes the door again and heads downstairs, tying to tread lightly on each one to avoid the creaks.

To her dismay, she is only half way down when Mark pokes his head around the kitchen door. ‘Want some pancakes?’

She’s surprised by the offer and his friendly expression. He’s been strange around her lately and its made her feel unwelcome in the pub. What had felt like a unique and exciting new home now feels like a malevolent prison. She forces a smile that makes her face sting.

‘Okay sure. Thanks.’

Her stomach is in knots and she’s not sure she can manage a single bite but she doesn’t want to annoy him any further. She needs him on side – she needs to feel safe here. So she holds the smile on her aching face and follows him into the kitchen, watching warily as he plops homemade pancakes onto two plates.

‘Shall I take some up to Mum?’

He shakes his head and passes her the syrup. ‘No, let her sleep.’

‘What time is the appointment later?’

‘Half two. You’ll be okay walking home?’ He eyes her carefully. ‘Straight home,’ he adds.

‘Yeah, of course. Though I thought I might go for a bit of a wander if the rain stops. There are still some places I haven’t explored yet.’ Jaime wants to lay the groundwork – it’s such a small town and if anyone mentions to Mark that she was near the old church, he won’t be impressed at all.

‘Like where?’ he asks, chewing on pancake.

‘That way.’ She points behind her. ‘I haven’t been to the stables yet or anything over there. I bet the views are good too.’

‘East?’ Mark cocks an eyebrow. ‘Oh, okay. Yeah well, as long as you stay out of trouble.’

Jaime swallows her mouthful and looks down at her plate. ‘Of course. I just like exploring, getting to know the place.’

‘It’s a beautiful place,’ he says and she nods.

‘I know.’

‘Really beautiful. We’ve got everything, haven’t we? All those rolling hills, protecting us down here. Woods and fields and rivers and streams. So much untouched countryside. You don’t find that anywhere else these days.’

‘No?’

‘No. It’s all built over. Developed. So many places now, they look at fields or woods and just see money. Pound signs. What can they build? How much money can they make? Sod the wildlife.’

‘That’s so sad.’

‘It is. It’s criminal. But not here. The countryside, the wildlife is valued here. Protected. We’ve got everything we need in our little town and we’re surrounded by natural beauty. We’re very lucky.’

‘The mayor wouldn’t ever allow any of it to be developed then?’

Mark looks horrified. ‘God no, never. She loves this place. Her ancestors founded it. It’s in her blood to protect it and serve it, and in return it protects us, right?’

Jaime pushes a smile across her aching face. ‘Right.’

He smiles back and pats her shoulder as he takes his plate to the sink. ‘Good. You’re very lucky to live here. Never forget that.’

A knock at the back door distracts him and he opens it and ushers in a man Jaime vaguely recognises as one of the delivery drivers around town. Instantly, Mark starts loading his sack truck up with prepared wooden crates.

‘Big order for Margaret,’ the guy comments and Mark chuckles.

‘Yeah, I’m sure they just enjoy a drink or three at those committee meetings, eh?’

Jaime shifts slightly to watch. She recalls that every Thursday and Saturday, the same man turns up to collect crates of drinks businesses around town have ordered from Mark. He puts the orders together the night before and each crate is labelled with its destination. Hill Fort Farm. The community centre. The school. Rowan Farm. Her eyes widen and a plan start to formulate in her head.

3

Ralph stumbles blearily down the corridor, rubbing his face with both hands to wake himself up. He hasn’t been sleeping well, in fact he can’t remember the last time he slept properly. It’s all starting to catch up with him – as if he’s been running on fumes for so long, on adrenalin and fear and wonder. His mother noticed it this morning, frowning at him in concern as he lethargically spooned cornflakes into his mouth.

‘Are you coming down with something?’

‘No,’ he insisted quickly before collecting up his stuff and getting out of the house. All day the exhaustion has been suffocating him, dragging him down and drowning out his surroundings. His head feels thick and fuzzy but it’s okay – he has made it to the end of the day. The doors are in sight. He will make his way separately to the old church and meet the others there.

Ralph is almost there when a clawing hand shocks him by latching roughly onto his shoulder. He gasps and looks up into Mr Hewlett’s troubled face.

‘I’m sorry Ralph but I really need a word with you, right now.’ He turns and gestures to his office; his movements brisk, impatient, perhaps even nervous.

Ralph enters the office hesitantly then gasps again as the door closes, revealing Mr Bishop. Ralph shrinks away but there is nowhere to go.

‘We’re concerned about you, Ralph,’ Mr Bishop growls.

Ralph examines him quickly. He is sweating and his tie is askew but there is an excitable glow in his eyes and a thinly stretched sneer on his lips.

‘Your teachers are concerned,’ adds Hewlett, standing back and wringing his hands. ‘They say you’re not concentrating. You’re tired and preoccupied.’

Bishop’s head juts forward. ‘You fell asleep in class today, Ralph.’

He nods quickly. ‘I know. I’m sorry. I’ll definitely go to bed earlier tonight.’ He reaches slowly for the door handle behind him. ‘I’ve just been staying up reading, that’s all.’

‘That’s not all,’ Bishop snaps, leaning closer. ‘You’ve been slacking, Ralph. Letting yourself be led astray. Poking around in things and trying to be a hero. You’re weak. Puny. Miserable. I can smell that from here.’

And to Ralph’s horror, Mr Bishop’s nostrils start to work rapidly, and his head bobs up and down as if picking up a scent from Ralph’s body. He flattens himself against the door, his heart racing.

‘Edward,’ Mr Hewlett says gently, a hand landing on the other man’s arm. ‘Let’s not scare the boy. A warning is all that is needed here. No need to call home or suspend him or anything too dramatic.’

‘Stop digging, little pig,’ Mr Bishop rasps, his eyes widening, almost bulging from his face. ‘Stop digging around like a greedy ungrateful piggy and be satisfied with what you have here. Do you understand?’

Ralph tugs at the handle. ‘You can’t hurt me… You can’t…’

‘No, I can’t,’ Bishop agrees, a delighted grin lighting up his face. ‘Not here. Not in my school. But out there. At night… When I’m hungry…’ He looks at Ralph, his eyes glinting as he drags a glistening tongue across his lower lip. ‘I think you’d taste like pork. That Jaime girl too. Two chubby porky-pigs who think they can be heroes. Oh no. Oh no, no, no.’

Bishop backs up then, seemingly satisfied and Ralph yanks the door open. Hewlett lays a hand on his shoulder once again. ‘Just be a good boy, Ralph. Understand how special this place is. Wake up, before it’s too late.’

Ralph struggles free and leaves in a hurry.

4

The rain intensifies, plastering Willow’s cloak to her hunched shoulders. It drives at her; wind and rain pushing her back as if even the weather is trying to stop her from making it. Willow grits her teeth and pushes forward. She is driven by love. By the need to see Paddy again and by the urge to show him and the truth to the others. They have the truth now and she is dizzy with it. At the back of her head, Willow hears a faint voice crying out, reminding her that this doesn’t change anything; they are all so helpless, powerless against the committee and if they were to tell the town or their parents, who would believe them? Willow knows it is more than likely that people will just get angry with them, turn on them even, like Mark has done to Jaime.

But right now, she pushes the voice away. The confirmation that Paddy is the black hare, that Paddy is still alive and with them, is a victory. Her heart swells with love and joy. For now, despite everything, she will cling to it. The bottom of her cloak is sopping wet and sticks to her ankles as she climbs the hill and approaches the church.

It’s made of the same stone as the ruins, she thinks – at least it looks like it – the same stone found in the ancient graveyard before Black Woods. The church is strangled by ivy, greenery dominates the brickwork and smothers the windows. Shrubs, mostly brambles, have devoured the space around the building, but Willow finds a way through, using a stick to beat back the thorns until she finds the three stone steps and beyond them, the thick wooden door.

It’s hanging open, rotting off its hinges, forced free by ivy. Willow pushes through, relived to be out of the rain and finds herself in the small simple church, and there right in front of her, resting on haunches in a small patch of light, is the hare.

Willow cries out in surprise and relief. ‘Paddy,’ she whispers and the hare eyes her carefully, not thumping his foot, not moving towards her.

She crouches down and holds out a hand. Rain water drips steadily from her cloak, pooling on the grimy stone floor around her. ‘It’s all right. It’s me. It’s okay. The others are coming.’

The hare stares past her at the door behind. He appears skittish she thinks, unsure of her and the surroundings. His ears swivel and she too can hear footsteps outside. ‘It’s just Jaime and Ralph,’ she tells him. ‘Don’t worry. No one is going to hurt you. They’re just going to be a bit shocked, that’s all.’

She remains crouched but looks over her shoulder for the others as they stumble hesitantly into the church. They brush cobwebs from their shoulders and shake rain from their hair and clothes, gazing around in wonder before they both stop still and stare, frozen, their eyes fixed on the hare.

Jaime slaps both hands over her mouth and squeaks. Ralph’s jaw drops open, his eyes bulging. He staggers forward and kneels beside Willow.

‘Is that?… Is it?…Him?’

Willow beams proudly as them whilst still holding a soothing hand out to the black hare.

‘Yes, it’s Paddy, it really is. He found me last night. Saved me. Look, ask him. It’s one thump for yes, two for no.’

Jaime lowers herself shakily to her knees and slips her hand around Ralph’s arm as if she needs something solid to anchor herself to reality.

‘Paddy?’ she asks. ‘Paddy, is that you?’

The hare’s nostrils twitch. The ears swivel. Then he thumps one foot, hard and sure. Yes.

‘Jesus fucking Christ,’ says Ralph.

5

Whatever the smell is, it’s getting stronger.

Jesse rises from his bed, pushing sweaty sheets away and swiping back his hair with shaking fingers. He crosses the room, opens the window and inhales.

Something still lingers.

In his mouth too – as if all the crazy dreams have left a memory there. He runs his tongue over his teeth, grimaces then spits out of the window.

The smell again – something in the air, faint but yet… It’s like its talking to him, whispering in his ear, trying to get through…

Irritated, Jesse leaves the room, his empty stomach growling. Margaret has brought him breakfast and lunch but he hasn’t been able to eat a thing. He stalks the corridor restlessly. He doesn’t feel well – or normal – but he can’t stay still either. He can’t stay in the house a moment longer. He hurries downstairs and finds his boots in the hallway. He sits down wearily and heavily to pull them on.

A noise in the kitchen distracts him so he wanders in, boot laces trailing, to find Hilda alone in her wheelchair, feeding Jaffa cakes to Horatio.

‘Where’s Margaret?’

She rolls her eyes but won’t look at him. She feeds another chocolate coated cake to the dog who sits obediently before her, licking his lips and wagging his thick yellow tail.

‘You shouldn’t give him those,’ Jesse grumbles as he heads to the door. ‘They’re bad for dogs.’

‘He’s not a dog, stupid.’

‘What?’ Jesse spins to face her. She giggles and bites her lip. ‘What did you say?’

Hilda frowns, pats Horatio on the head and throws a Jaffa cake at Jesse. It hits him on the chest then lands on the floor and Horatio blunders over to gobble it up.

‘What did you say about Horatio?’

‘He’s not a dog, stupid.’

‘But what does that mean? And where’s Margaret? Where’s your sister?’

‘Not my sister, stupid.’ Hilda throws another Jaffa cake and it strikes him on the chin.

‘Ow! Stop that! You’re so annoying!’

‘And you’re so stupid, stupid.’ With that, Hilda sweeps the crumbs from her lap and spins her chair around. ‘Come on, Horatio.’

The fat Labrador trundles after her.

‘What do you mean, he’s not a dog? She’s not your sister? What is she then?’

But there is no reply. Jesse considers following her. Maybe grabbing her wheelchair and forcing her to stop. But outside, the smell permeates the air, drifting up his nostrils and causing saliva to fill his mouth. He’s suddenly hungry. Ravenously hungry. His stomach is an empty, aching pit and the smell on the air is one he simply can’t ignore.

Unaware of anything else, of any other senses or thoughts, Jesse leaves the farm, follows the smell and starts to run.

6

‘I can’t believe it.’

Several phrases have been running through Jaime’s mind since she walked into the church and saw the hare and all of them sound trite and predictable. The truth is, she can believe it because there he is – a black hare, a rare and mysterious wild animal that should be afraid of them but is instead communicating with them via foot thumps. If she wasn’t already sitting down, she knows she would have fallen.

Jaime glances at Willow and sees pure joy on her normally serious face. For a moment, Jaime softens and allows herself to sink lower, resting gently on her knees as a long sigh escapes her.

‘I don’t know where to start,’ she murmurs, then a giggle escapes before she can stop it. ‘Nice to meet you again?’

Willow flashes her a grin. ‘Amazing, isn’t it? Isn’t he? I mean, have you ever seen anything so beautiful?’

Ralph swallows and shakes his head slightly. ‘Shit. Crap. I mean, Christ. I got nothing.’ He shrugs and continues to stare at Paddy. ‘Paddy Finnis. Bloody hell. Did anyone get a message to Jesse?’

The girls shake their heads. ‘I’ll go to the farm with Mum later, or tomorrow,’ says Ralph. ‘He wasn’t at school today.’

‘You said he saved you.’ Jaime turns to Willow. ‘What happened?’

Willow takes a breath. ‘I was near Black Woods and something was in there, watching me. I don’t know what, or who. But the birds all flew out in a panic and I saw something moving in there. I even saw its eyes…’ Another breath. ‘And then Paddy, he appeared out of nowhere and led me back into town, right back to the treehouse.’

Ralph gapes. ‘Seriously?’

She nods, grinning. ‘I know. I guess it’s safe for him there. He has to be so careful. Look what happened to Iris Cotton!’

Jaime shudders and looks back at the hare. At Paddy. ‘This is so bizarre, I feel like I’m dreaming.’ She suddenly remembers Mark’s deliveries and places a hand on Willow’s knee. ‘Before I forget, I think I know a way we can sneak onto Rowan Farm and maybe talk to Bob Rowan.’

Willow’s smile fades in concern. ‘Are you kidding? Why would you want to go back there after what happened?’

‘I don’t, but we need to talk to him, Willow. Mark has this delivery van and this guy, he takes crates of drinks all over town. I noticed one said Rowan Farm on it.’

‘I’ll do it,’ Ralph speaks up with a glum nod. ‘Armed, of course.’

‘Not yet.’ Willow waves a hand at him. ‘We need to be patient and slow down a bit. We need to talk to Paddy and find out as much as we can.’

Jaime knows she should be amazed by this but somehow she is not. She smiles at Willow, then at the hare. ‘That really is awesome. I’m so glad you’re okay, Paddy. I hope you know how worried we’ve all been.’

‘Did you see the missing persons posters?’ asks Ralph.

One thump, yes. They all laugh. Then Willow grows sombre. ‘Not that anyone in this fucked up town gave a shit. Bet most of them knew what really happened to you.’

‘Did they?’ Jaime stares at Paddy.

Two thumps, no. Paddy yawns and stretches.

‘Hope we’re not keeping you up!’ Ralph jokes.

‘I have too many questions,’ complains Jaime. ‘Willow, I don’t even know where to start.’

‘Can you change back?’ Ralph jumps in. ‘Can you ever be human again?’

The animal does not hesitate. He delivers two hard thumps to the stone floor of the church.

‘Do you know that for sure?’ asks Jaime.

Two more thumps; no, not for sure.

‘But you’re not like Iris Cotton,’ Jaime goes on. ‘She was human and a hare. She could change, right?’ On thump for yes. ‘But you’re stuck? You can’t change back and forth? You can’t control it?’

‘Slow down, Jaime.’ Willow touches her shoulder gently. Paddy thumps twice, no, he can’t control it.

‘How did it happen?’ gasps Ralph.

Willow sighs. ‘Yes or no questions, Ralph. Let’s go back to the start. Paddy, we know you found a weird old book in the shop and your dad didn’t know where it came from. Jaime spoke to Iris and she admitted leaving it there but wouldn’t say why. Did you know it was from her?’

Two thumps, no.

‘Did you suspect it was her?’

One, yes.

‘Why?’ Willow asks, then groans. ‘I mean, was it something she said?’

One thump, yes.

Willow’s wide eyes meet Jaime’s. ‘Oh! I wish I knew what she’d said!’

Jaime nods frantically and shifts her position to cross-legged. ‘She talked to you after you found it?’ Thump. ‘She hinted, maybe? Mentioned a book? Something subtle, right?’ Thump. ‘She wanted you to know it was her.’ A pause. Then, one thump.

‘Well, we kind of knew all that already,’ Ralph reminds them. ‘What else can we ask? Oh, shit! I nearly forgot! I just got hauled in to see Bishop and Hewlett!’ They all stare at him. He nods grimly. ‘Yeah, scary as hell. Hewlett was all anxious and weird, but Bishop wasn’t messing around. He kept sniffing me like an animal and then he threatened me.’

Jaime turns stiffly to look at him. ‘What did he say?’

‘He called me a greedy piggy. Greedy, ungrateful piggy, he said, who should be satisfied with what I have. And I said he couldn’t hurt me and he said at night he could, if he was hungry.’ Ralph pauses and swallows thickly. ‘He said I’d taste like pork. And you too, Jaime, He said we thought we could be heroes but we can’t, and then Hewlett, he told me to just be a good boy and wake up. Wake up, he said, before it’s too late!’

There is a silence as they each take this in – then Willow slings a friendly arm around his shoulders and gives him a side hug.

‘And yet here you are, definitely not being a good boy. Oh, Ralph.’

He smiles bravely. ‘I know.’

Willow focuses back on Paddy. ‘So, Iris, she had a power then? She could become a hare. I mean, stories like that go back centuries. Hares have been linked to witchcraft among other things in loads of cultures.’

One thump; Paddy agrees. Willow smiles and reaches out to tickle him under the chin.

‘Mayfield can change too,’ Jaime reminds them. ‘We know that because of Jesse, but into what, Paddy? Is it a wolf? Something like that?’ One reluctant thump. Jaime shudders. ‘And what about Margaret?’

Thump.

‘What is she? A bird?’ Thump.

‘Good guess,’ nods Ralph.

Jaime shakes her head. ‘I had a feeling. There was a bird of prey the day I tried to speak to Iris. I’m not sure what kind.’

‘An owl?’ Ralph asks Paddy.

Two thumps. ‘A sparrowhawk?’ asks Willow.

Two thumps.

‘It doesn’t matter,’ sighs Jaime. ‘She’s a bird. And so is Bob Rowan.’

Paddy stretches out his back legs one by one, then thumps another yes for good measure.

Jaime laughs. ‘I already knew.’ She points to her face. ‘Have you seen the state of me?’

‘Are they a danger to you, Paddy?’ wonders Ralph. ‘All those predators?’

Another firm thump in reply. Yes. Ralph, Willow and Jaime exchange glances.

‘Is it witchcraft?’ Willow asks and when Paddy does not respond with a yes or a no, she throws her hands up in frustration. ‘Was it in the book? Are we talking about spells? Magic of some sort?’

Paddy stares at her for a long still moment before slowly lifting his toes from the floor, then lowering them again; more of a bump than a thump.

‘You’re not sure,’ states Jaime.

They swap glances again. ‘What now?’ Ralph sounds nervous.

‘We’ve been trying to translate the book – what we had of it,’ says Willow. ‘Should we keep trying? Will it help?’

Paddy does not respond – instead, he stares over their shoulders, his eyes bulging and his ears held stiff and taut.

‘Is there anything we can do, Paddy?’ Jaime presses him.

Paddy springs to all four paws – back legs slightly extended and one forepaw raised . His ears swivel and his nose twitches. His eyes widen.

‘What is it?’ frowns Willow, looking over her shoulder. ‘Is something wrong?’

The hare thumps once for yes.

Ralph gets up and hurries to the door, knocking cobwebs out of the way as he moves. ‘I’ll check.’

‘Is it danger?’ whispers Jaime, stiffening in fear.

Ralph has poked his head through the door. ‘I can’t see anything,’ he calls back. ‘Not from here.’

‘I’ll check the window,’ says Jaime, jumping up. ‘He looks terrified.’

Willow looks on as Jaime blunders clumsily between old wooden pews to check the windows on the other side.

‘Paddy, we need to know what to do,’ Willow begs. ‘If not the book, then what? What can we do? Who can we trust? How can we stop them?’

‘I can’t see anything,’ shrugs Jaime, crossing the aisle to join Ralph at the other windows.

‘Paddy?’ Willow persists, her tone pleading. ‘Please tell us. Can we stop them?’

Paddy’s eyes widen even further – they seem to be protruding from either side of his elongated face. Did it hurt, Willow wants to ask him, when they changed you? How? Why? What is wrong with this town?

‘Can we stop them?’ she cries at him. He hops closer and thumps once.

Yes.

7

Jesse runs in a manner that makes it feel like he has never truly ran before. His memories suggest otherwise – he’s ran from home, Mayfield, Bishop, monsters and more but not like this. He isn’t running from something, he is running towards something and that makes all the difference.

He doesn’t feel scared and that is astonishing, mind-blowing even. He isn’t being chased. He isn’t going to be pinned down and torn to shreds.

He can run, like the hare and the dogs, he can run. He tears around the edge of town, feeling the thud and rebound of ancient earth and stone beneath his feet and his mind throbs with vivid images of blood and bone and he feels that too, under the earth. And more than that – he smells it too. All of it. Not just the wet grass he’s thundering through, not just the rain, or the smells from town – everything else, every layer hidden under the soil, under the town.

And he can smell blood.

Fresh blood. Pumping, running, flowing, pulsing. He can smell it; it fills his nostrils, feeds his brain and coats the inside of his mouth.

Jesse runs, faster, faster, closer, closer, following the smell, letting it lead him home. And as he runs he salivates and his teeth feel strange, disconnected, trembling for more. He runs until he sees the old church looming up on the far hill on the east side of town. He doesn’t slow. He has unending stamina – his muscles are pumped full of adrenalin and hunger.

He runs – powering on, long strides leading him closer and the smell is getting stronger and stronger until it becomes unbearable – a drug, a longing, an ache, a need. It’s heavy and cloying in the air, sweet and sour and dripping with juice… He runs faster. He runs up to the church, closing the distance between himself and Ralph in impossible time.

Jesse does not acknowledge Ralph’s open face gazing out at him in confusion and wonder. He barges past him – he is flying, running, hunting.

He skids to a stop, his tall frame almost toppling over as he runs into Willow and Jaime.

‘Jesus, how did you know?’ cries Jaime and when he glances at her he sees confusion and trembling uncertainty wash over her features. He stares back at her and something in his face makes her back away. ‘Jesse?’

‘What’s wrong?’ asks Willow, but he pushes her aside, nostrils working frantically and then he sees the slope of a black-furred backside slipping between cracks in the wood on the far side of the church.

Jesse growls and charges after it but it’s gone.

He roars, shoving wooden pews and random dusty chairs out of his way until he finds the doorknob of the back room and twists it violently.

‘Jesse, what’s wrong?’ Ralph is pulling at him, fearful like a small creature, trembling like a leaf in the rain.

Jesse wrenches open the door and plunges into the next room but there is no sign of the sleek dark creature, only a room crammed to the ceiling with old tables, chairs and benches. He edges around them, cobwebs stretching with him and a solitary pigeon arises from the top of the jumble to flap bossily out of a broken window.

He smells, searches, hunts, but it is too late. It’s gone. He can’t smell its blood anymore. He can’t smell anything except damp and mildew and thick dust, bricks and rotten wood.

Bewildered, Jesse walks back to face his friends. They are clustered together, staring at him in terror. He’s not sure why. What did he do?

Then suddenly he doubles over – a sharp pain ripping through his body, cutting him in half. Another one attacks his head and the pain bellows in his ears. He drops to his knees before their frightened faces.

‘Help me…’

He pitches forward into darkness.

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Black Hare Valley: Chapter Twenty-Five “Secrets and Lies”

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1

Willow knows the answer lies with Paddy. If he is the black hare, he has been looking out for them. If he is the black hare, he must know the answers. He must know everything.

‘I have to find him,’ she whispers over the phone to Jaime on Wednesday evening. ‘I’m gonna go out tonight on my own and see what happens.’

There is a pause before Jaime clears her throat and says nervously, ‘That sounds risky, Willow. You don’t know what could happen.’ There is a little intake of breath and Willow suspects that Jaime is a bit tearful. ‘Look what happened to me.’

Willow hasn’t seen Jaime’s injuries because Jaime has not been back to school this week. Willow has called numerous times but it was only this evening she actually got to speak to Jaime. And that was only because her mother answered the phone, not Mark.

Jaime is scared and Willow does not blame her. A change has come over the town slowly but surely. It’s subtle things, unless you see Mark Aster’s merging into an evil stepfather as subtle. Jaime doesn’t. And neither does Willow.

‘How are things? How’s your face?’

‘It’ll probably scar.’

‘Oh, shit.’

‘That’s what Mark says. I was lucky not to lose an eye.’

‘We’ll take weapons next time,’ Willow assures her.

Jaime laughs but does not sound amused. ‘Yeah, right.’

‘No, I mean it. I’m deadly serious. I’m not going out tonight without a weapon, I can tell you that. Really though, how are things?’

Jaime exhales softly. ‘Weird,’ she says, her voice dropping lower. ‘Tense. My mum is just so tired I don’t think she notices what’s going on. Mark is…’ She trails off and Willow pictures her chewing her nails. ‘He’s different, Willow. Like he’s turned into a guard dog for the town or something. What about your parents?’

‘Yeah, they’re a bit weird, but then, they always have been.’ She pauses, hoping to encourage at least a chuckle from Jaime, but there is nothing. She sighs. ‘I don’t know, the best I can explain it is they seem sort of sad, but then my mum does get like that sometimes.’

‘Sad?’

‘Yeah, just sort of down and deflated. Sad. I was gonna ask my mum more about those photos and what happened to Carol-Anne but I can’t bring myself to do it. I don’t want to make her worse.’

There is a pause during which Willow thinks she can hear adult voices in the background.

‘It’s okay, just Mark,’ Jaime says then. ‘He wants to know who I’m talking to.’

‘Jesus, what’s his problem? He always seemed like an okay guy.’

‘I don’t know. I just know that he wants us to stop. I don’t think he’s in on anything but he doesn’t like us digging. I’m gonna have to be very careful.’

‘Has Ralph still got everything?’

‘Yes.’ Jaime breathes out in relief. ‘He does. And I can meet with him tomorrow, maybe. Mum has an appointment for the baby and Mark’s going with her. They won’t notice if I’m not straight home from school.’

‘Okay, great. I’ll try too. The ruins?’

‘Maybe somewhere else.’

‘The abandoned church then?’

‘Yeah, why not? Hey, Willow?’

‘Yeah?’

‘Be careful tonight. Don’t forget, people have gone missing. Maybe dead. Maybe changed. But we don’t know for sure so we don’t understand the danger yet.’

‘Maybe Paddy can tell me,’ Willow responds hopefully.

‘You really miss him, don’t you?’

Willow has to take a deep and steadying breath to fight off the sudden urge to cry. When it’s gone, she forces a smile and straightens her shoulders. She has to do this. She has to find him. ‘Yeah, I do. But I’m not giving up, Jaime. I owe him that.’

2

‘There’s a meeting tonight and I want you to attend.’

Jesse looks up from his schoolbooks. Studying is a fairly new concept for him but Margaret insists on it. His work is spread out on the kitchen table and a plate of chocolate chip cookies is placed in the middle. On the other side of the table, Hilda sits, pouting. She hasn’t thrown anything yet but he knows it’s coming.

‘Why?’ he asks Margaret, genuinely curious.

She stares back at him coldly. It’s obvious she’s not been the same since the white hare was killed by his brothers and he fears she blames him. His guts turn to ice every time she looks at him and when he’s not looking at her, he’s looking at the door.

Margaret zips up her wax jacket. Her face is impassive and unimpressed. ‘Because you might as well be useful,’ she snaps. ‘Because you owe it to us, don’t you think?’ She stares back at him, challenging him to disagree.

He shrugs, not sure of the answer.

Her hands land on the table beside him and she leans closer. ‘Let me remind you that it was your idle brothers who murdered her and now our committee is one short.’

He holds up a hand. ‘Hang on, I thought she left the committee? I thought she hadn’t been part of it for ages.’

Margaret freezes and for a fraction of a second Jesse sees a flash of panic in her steely eyes. She straightens up a little abruptly and runs a tongue over her teeth.

‘That’s right.’ Her voice is small and tight. ‘She had retired from official duties but you must understand, me and her went back a very long time and she was still very much one of us, despite our differences.’

Jesse’s guts clench in fear but he thinks he may as well go for it while he can. ‘Differences? You mean like her trying to warn Paddy by leaving him that book and then her house getting burned down as a punishment?’

Margaret freezes again but this time he detects no panic in her eyes. Instead her pupils dilate and her mouth twitches. ‘Oh, Jesse, is that really what you think of us?’

He scowls at her obvious amusement. ‘You don’t want to know what I think of you.’

She snorts. ‘All right then, dear. Well, it appears there is much you don’t understand.’

‘Because you don’t tell me and I’m not allowed to ask!’ He throws up his hands in frustration. Hilda picks up a cookie and aims it at his head. ‘Ow! Stop it!’

‘Yes, I agree, Hilda. We don’t trust him enough yet, do we?’

Jesse shoves back his chair and slams his books shut. ‘Then why am I here? Let me go then.’

‘Oh, I don’t think so,’ laughs Margaret. ‘Back to your criminal family where you’ll be an even bigger thorn in our sides? No. You’re here so I can keep an eye on you. And while you’re here you can be useful. Be ready at 7pm, young man. Our meeting starts then.’

With that, she turns on her heel, picks up her rifle and walks out. The door slams and Hilda releases a high-pitched laugh before launching another cookie at Jesse’s head.

3

Willow waits until her parents are settled dreamily in front of the TV. They loll against each other like dolls, heads touching in the middle.

‘I’m going for a walk,’ she tells them from the doorway, lifting up the camera she is wearing around her neck. ‘Feel like taking photos of the moon.’

It’s a lie but they seem to buy it. Her mother smiles weakly and her father just about manages to lift a hand in a wave.

Willow frowns. ‘Are you guys okay? You seem kind of…’

‘Just tired, love,’ her mother continues to smile even while her eyelids flutter. ‘It’s been a long day.’

No longer than any other, Willow thinks but she shrugs and waves goodbye. ‘Won’t be long.’ She leaves with a kitchen knife tucked inside her cloak. As she goes, she has the feeling that she could stay out all night and they wouldn’t notice. This is getting weirder, she thinks, pulling up her hood before facing the town.

It stares back. She wonders if it is tired of her and she shudders as she moves away from the safety of her home and heads right on to the High Street. She doesn’t really know which direction to take or where to look for Paddy. She just feels like the outer reaches of the town might be worth wandering. She clutches the camera and every now and then she stops to take a photo.

Willow heads east – deciding she will walk the perimeter of the town, as far from the buildings as she can get. Surely if Paddy is out there, he will come to her? She walks to the far end of the High Street and gazes around. It is a black night, no stars, and the moon is a faded silver circle behind low clouds. To her left, are the stables and riding school and on her right, the veterinary surgery and car park. She pauses, scanning the quiet streets, listening for anything. There is one light on at the stables and one car parked in front. She keeps walking then veers right, wondering if there is more chance of finding Paddy closer to his home.

Leaving the road, her boots stomp through long wet grass and every now and then she feels the shape of something harder and older beneath her feet – the stones of ancient buildings, long gone. Her path takes her around the edge and as she climbs the valley wall she can see lights on in the houses of Black Hare Close and Black Hare Road. The higher she climbs, the smaller the town becomes, until she is on the border of the Quigley Farm and is heading towards Black Woods.

Something moves in there – a twisting, slithering movement between the blackened trunks of densely packed trees, that makes her gasp and freeze. Suddenly, a flurry of wings break free from the treeline – pigeons mostly, spooked and panicked, they rise. She watches them go then hears a howl that turns her blood to ice.

Something is hunting in Black Woods.

4

The drawing room is full of shadows. Jesse watches them flicker and dance on the walls as Margaret settles Hilda to bed. Horatio lies like a beached whale in front of the roaring fire. Despite the fire, Jesse feels cold.

He sits in a rigid straight-backed chair upholstered in rough red velvet, with his arms wrapped around himself. He finds his gaze keeps tracking to the door. He thinks about running and finds himself breathless with longing.

The doorbell rings and Horatio whines but doesn’t get up. Jesse tenses. His limbs feel like stones as his body seems to contract in on itself. One by one he hears them arrive – a cold drought flows in, as the doors open and close. He hears boots on tiles, coats being removed, murmuring voices and robust, friendly greetings.

Then, one by one they enter the drawing room and Jesse cannot look at them. Aaron Mayfield, Eugenie Spires, Sylvia Gordon, Vicar Roberts and Neville Hewlett. One by one they fill the room and Jesse closes his eyes, wishing none of this was real. He can see their faces inside his head; large and pale, all looming over him as their pupils dilate in excitement. He opens his eyes but he still can’t look, still can’t move, and now he realises it is not just his cold fear, it is something else. Something coming from them. Something they are doing. He tries to shift in the chair but he can’t. He tries to turn his head but he can’t. He can’t even move his eyes. He can’t even blink.

Jesse feels his heartbeat accelerate under his clothes. A cold sweat breaks out on the nape of his neck and spreads to his frozen shoulder blades. He tells himself to stay calm, to wait, to breathe.

One after the other, they sit down. It is Sylvia Gordon who speaks first, accepting a glass of red wine from Margaret as she flips a notepad open on her lap.

‘First, Edward sends his apologies,’ she announces to the room. ‘He’s not going to make it, I’m afraid. Something came up.’

The others respond by giggling appreciatively. ‘Yes, indeed,’ Margaret says softly, glancing away. ‘He’s still enjoying the novelty and who can blame him?’

‘Well, onto the first point of discussion,’ Sylvia glances at her notepad. ‘Anti-social behaviour outside the leisure centre. Graffiti and litter mostly but the manager has brought it to our attention.’

Mayfield clears his throat. ‘Put cameras up. Catch the buggers and speak to their parents. I can do it first thing tomorrow.’

‘Wonderful,’ smiles Margaret. ‘Sylvia, you can cross that one off as resolved.’

‘All right. Next we have out of control dogs. In particular, dogs being used for illegal hunting and poaching. What do we plan to do?’

‘We know whose dogs they were,’ says Margaret calmly. ‘Aaron, would you arrange to speak to Billy and Wyatt Archer at your earliest convenience? They don’t own the dogs but I’m told they know who does.’

‘I’ll do that tomorrow,’ replies Mayfield. ‘Do you want more cameras here? Around the borders perhaps?’

‘If I’m honest I’d like to do something a little more impactful to protect my land and my birds.’

‘Oh? What were you thinking?’

‘Traps,’ Margaret says and Jesse knows she is staring right at him. ‘Good old-fashioned traps. I’ve got some in the cellar, you know. A spot of oil and they’ll be fine.’

‘What kind of traps?’ Neville Hewlett questions, his voice a tad too high.

‘The kind that take your foot off,’ she tells him and there is a long silence.

‘Noted,’ Sylvia says after a while. ‘Resolved, for now. We’ll keep an eye on the issue, obviously. Now, item number three this evening, fundraising. We’ve got three big events coming up in the following months, with the summer garden party, followed by the Harvest Festival, followed by the Christmas tree lighting and carols. Our funds are looking good but we haven’t done any official fundraising in a while. I was thinking the school could get involved and I’ve already checked with Edward. He says we can arrange something; a raffle perhaps? A quiz night? The parents always like those. A poster competition?’

‘All fine ideas,’ Margaret says. ‘Come up with two for each event, please. Sylvia, will that cover it?’

‘We could ask local businesses too. They could donate prizes for the raffle and put up posters.’

‘Of course.’

‘All right, now moving on to item number four.’ Sylvia turns a page. ‘The remains of Black Hare cottage. Several residents have brought this up but I don’t know what to tell them. Do we know who owns the land?’

‘Iris,’ says Margaret, wistfully. ‘It was in her family for generations.’

‘I see. Do we know if it was insured? Have any of her family mentioned what they want to do?’

‘Sell it, I expect,’ says Aaron. ‘They were embarrassed by the old woman and want to forget about it. Something of a curse, I expect, that house, that land. I can speak to Sarah-Jane if you like. See what she wants to do.’

‘Perhaps I should speak to her?’ Vicar Roberts speaks up. ‘She is one of my congregation after all.’

Margaret nods. ‘Of course.’

Aaron grunts.

‘That’s everything,’ says Sylvia, pen poised. ‘Does anyone have any issues they would like to raise?’

There is a low rumble as the members respond and Jesse can see heads shaking out of the corner of his eye.

‘All right then.’ Sylvia snaps the notebook shut. ‘Meeting adjourned. We’ll meet again on the-’

Margaret interrupts. ‘Thank you, Sylvia. Well then, lets enjoy a drink or two and each other’s company. I hear Catherine is feeling very tired and drained at the moment so I don’t expect we’ll see her at many more meetings before the baby is born.’

‘Everything okay though?’ Eugenie enquires.

‘Yes, I believe so. Nothing to worry about. But anyway, as you can all see, my house guest is here in her place. I wanted to give him a glimpse of how our committee operates. So, here he is. You all know Jesse Archer, of course.’

Still frozen, Jesse can feel their eyes narrowing in on him and he can hear their jumble of responses, a mixture of polite greetings, groans and disappointed sighs.

Margaret appears before him, glaring down. ‘Yes, yes, I know he has quite a reputation around town, as do his family, but you know, since I’ve been accommodating him here I’ve seen a change in him.’

Another face joins hers and Jesse can see Mayfield’s piercing blue eyes burning into him. He swallows, just barely, but his body is still a locked prison.

‘Have you, Margaret?’ Eugenie asks from behind them. ‘In what way?’

Margaret tilts her head, smiling at him. ‘Better behaviour. Better attitude. Better attendance at school, improved grades. You can ask Edward.’

Another murmur travels around the group. Jesse hears a girlish giggle but is not sure who it came from.

‘Why don’t you tell us what you’re really thinking, Margaret?’ Aaron speaks slowly and softly, while his eyes burn into Jesse. He wants to squirm and cringe away from those eyes but he cannot move a muscle.

‘What I’m thinking is, our committee needs fresh blood. Young blood. A new line.’ Margaret speaks confidently but Jesse can hear the gasps and grumbles from the others. ‘In time, of course,’ she adds hastily. ‘When he is ready and only if he proves himself.’

‘And you really think he’s worthy?’ mutters Aaron.

‘Well, I think Margaret is right,’ says the vicar, suddenly appearing on her other side. ‘Everyone deserves a second chance and she’s right about needing new blood. After Iris, and Bob…’ He shakes his head sadly.

‘And we all know Catherine is not ready, nowhere near. I’ve got a feeling she’ll lose interest once the baby is born.’ It’s Sylvia now, appearing beside the vicar to join the line of committee members staring at Jesse. She grins at him greedily. ‘You’re a very lucky boy, Jesse. This is truly an honour.’

‘He doesn’t deserve it,’ Mayfield retorts. ‘He hasn’t earned it.’

‘Not yet,’ agrees Margaret. ‘But I have faith. And curiosity.’

‘And what if you’re wrong?’ Now Eugenie joins them, her wrinkled face peering around Mayfield’s broad shoulders. ‘You’d be risking everything, Margaret. Isn’t he one of the children causing trouble? Snooping around? We’ve been here before, you know.’

Margaret laughs. ‘Yes, and that’s partly why this is a good way forward. If we can welcome him on board and share our knowledge, what child would turn their back on that, Eugenie? After all, think about it, how many decades did you beg and simper and scrape to join us?’

Eugenie frowns but says nothing.

‘We should vote on it when Edward is present,’ suggest the vicar.

‘He’ll say no, like me,’ grunts Mayfield. ‘Vote now. Edward knows more than anyone what a worthless troublemaking shit this boy is.’

‘I told you he has changed,’ Margaret shoots back rather frostily. ‘And besides, we have leverage. We have his brothers. His friends. He’ll do anything to protect them. He’s a hero, Aaron, and that’s what really gets on your nerves. Vote then. I say yes.’

‘Me too,’ pipes up Sylvia, clapping her hands together as she beams at Jesse. ‘It’ll be interesting. And besides, he’s almost as handsome as his father used to be.’

‘I’m a yes,’ nods the vicar. ‘I agree with everything you said, Margaret. New blood and all that.’

Mayfield shoots him a look of disgust. ‘No from me and no from Edward.’

‘A no from me,’ Eugenie says with a scowl.

All eyes turn on Neville Hewlett, as he appears cautiously beside the vicar. He clears his throat and frowns at Jesse, a little pitying smile on his lips. He seems to know that this is his moment and takes longer than he needs to, as if enjoying the build-up of tension.

Finally he looks at Margaret and nods firmly, raising his glass. ‘It’s a yes from me. I believe that Margaret is right and let’s be honest, when has she ever been wrong when it comes to what is good for this town? I say if she has faith in the boy than we ought to trust her.’

‘Four against three,’ Margaret smiles smugly. ‘Excellent.’

She turns to Jesse and positions herself in front of him. She places her hands on either side of his frozen face. He feels the hold drop suddenly and he can move again – his fingers instinctively digging into the rigid armrests of the chair. His mouth falls open and he sucks in dry air.

‘Neville, would you fetch him a drink? I think it’s safe to allow Jesse a glimpse of what his life could be like, don’t you?’

Nevile nods obediently then disappears from view. Margaret strokes the hair back from Jesse’s face and he starts to shake violently. There is a strange energy in her touch; something that makes his stomach cramp. He leans back, but she takes a glass from Neville and thrusts it in front of him. It looks like red wine – it’s colour a deep earthy maroon and its scent reminding him of the stench in the cellar below.

‘One sip, Jesse, just one sip. You’ll feel something very interesting. You’ll share it with us. Understand?’

He nods stiffly because he has no choice. He takes the glass in one trembling hand and brings the rim to his lips while they all look on. He takes a breath and opens his lips, allowing the tiniest of drops to touch his tongue.

Jesse wrenches away and Margaret seizes the glass before it is dropped. He sticks out his tongue, longing to spit. It’s bitter yet sickly sweet, its smell like old iron, and it tastes like darkness. Breathing fast, he drops his head into his hands and closes his eyes.

5

Willow freezes – she wants to turn and run as fast as she can back the way she came, back towards the safe lights of town, but she is afraid to turn her back on whatever is watching her from Black Woods.

The silence is heavy, suffocating, making it impossible to draw breath. She feels like whatever is in there is waiting for any movement, any sound, and when it comes, the thing will come too, faster than she could ever imagine.

The stillness is eerie. No breeze, no swaying grass, or scurrying wildlife, no birds, nothing. Just Willow frozen and staring and the thing in the woods staring back. She starts to edge away, tiny movements at first, shuffles more than steps. She tries to move without making it obvious that she is moving. She sees two glowing orbs through the thick darkness between clusters of trees. She can think of nothing more horrible than being inside that darkness now, with the trees, snared in black.

Edging away slowly, Willow catches something else in her side vision. A sudden movement accompanied by the rustle of something pushing through grass. She is loath to take her eyes off the thing in the woods but when a small dark creature comes out of nowhere and crashes into her ankle, Willow has no choice. Open mouthed, eyes like moons, she stares down at the thing that has bumped into her and the thing stares back.

A jet black hare, ears pressed flat against its skull as it rebounds from her legs, twists violently then leaps away again at top speed. Willow turns swiftly, and a noise in the woods chills her blood: the thing in there is moving too. She takes off after the hare as it zig-zags wildly back down the hill towards town.

6

Jesse is running. His feet are pounding against the ground and when he looks down he sees road – flat and black, broken up by white lines. He is running down the middle of the high street at top speed but how did he get here? It seems surreal – a dream – wasn’t he at Margaret’s? In the drawing room, with the committee? With the fire roaring and Horatio snoring?

Jesse runs on. It feels good, he realises, the running; like he could take off and fly at any moment. He is moving so fast his feet are barely touching the ground and though he ought to feel winded by now, he doesn’t. He feels strong, agile, and something else, something knocking at the back of his brain, something like power or knowledge of power. Whatever it is, it makes him feel safe.

He glances over his shoulder. Is he being chased? Is that why he’s running so fast? But there is nothing there. Just an empty road and dead silent shops. So, he runs on and as he runs he is getting closer to something in front of him. Something running from him. He powers on, eyes glowing, teeth grinning as his lips pull back. He puts power into it, feeling the muscles in his thighs and chest flexing and stretching and still his tread is so light, so barely there he really could be flying.

The thing in front is small and he can smell its terror. It smells like sweat and piss. It makes him feel hungry and saliva drips from his teeth. He is gaining on it. It is slowing, tiring, panicking. It takes a sudden left and he charges after it – now longing to catch it, now desperate to sink his teeth (and claws?) into its flesh. He is close. Closer. He can smell its blood and hear its heartbeat and taste its fear. Closer. Closer. His feet fly in front of him and he realises then that he has no arms, no hands, only feet.

And his senses are in overdrive. He has never experienced such a wide and rich variety of sounds and sights and he just knows if he catches that terrified thing it will feel even better. Its squeal, its soft fur as he rips into it, its wet warm flesh its blood sweet and sticky in his mouth, its screams…

Closer… Closer…

Jesse jerks forward, pitching face first onto the floor. He feels hands grabbing for him but he falls through them and curls up as the images fade, as the running stops and as the taste and smell and sound of his prey meeting its grisly end is torn from his grasp like a cruel joke.

His belly aches. He gags and then heaves. He opens his eyes and stares up at their curious faces looking over him. He is breathless and drenched in sweat. He can feel his heartbeat in his ears and hunger is clawing at his throat.

‘What did you see, Jesse?’ the mayor is asking him, her eyes round and gleaming down at him. ‘What did you see? Tell us!’

‘Were you being chased?’ Mayfield asks, a glint of satisfaction in his eyes. Jesse shakes his head and instantly sees Mayfield’s face fall in dismay.

‘You were chasing something?’ Hewlett demands, a degree of excitement in his voice.

Jesse looks at him and nods. He remembers now. It was a dream or something. A hallucination maybe… Shit, what did they make him drink?

‘Did you feel it, Jesse?’ the mayor is asking him. ‘Did you feel the power? Did it feel good?’

Jesse can only nod. His mind is scrambled. He feels like he is on fire and he wants to escape, run outside and feel the wild night air on his skin again. He has no idea what just happened but the memory lingers…. Hunger, violence, blood. He rolls onto his front and throws up.

7

Willow races back down the hill, barely keeping the hare in sight, when she finally dares to look back over her shoulder, all she sees is Black Woods growing smaller on the hillside. She is not being chased by whatever lurked there and she knows something was there, watching, lying in wait. Whatever it was has not left the darkness of the trees, has not followed – at least, not as far as she can tell.

Willow runs faster than she knew she was able, but still, she has no chance of catching up with the hare. She can barely see it, zig-zagging at top speed back towards town.

‘Paddy!’ she calls out breathlessly. ‘Wait!’

But the hare does not wait; she is not even sure it heard her. It runs on and she catches sight of it bounding through tall grass close to the bridge.

‘Wait!’ she yells again, stopping briefly to catch her breath, hands on knees. She sees the hare on the bridge now – a black shadow poised on hind legs, long ears twitching as it stares back at her.

‘Wait,’ she begs, moving again. ‘Please wait.’

The hare leaps away, over the bridge and across the field behind the Station House. Willow stumbles on, less panicked now as she thinks she knows where it is heading. And sure enough, she is right. As Willow rushes out on to Station Road, she spots the hare already scampering soundlessly across the road, rounding the corner onto Black Hare Road.

Willow allows herself to slow down. She’s smiling as she crosses Station Road, because of course, it makes sense. Of course Paddy would return to the safest place in town. The hare must have followed her, she thinks as she walks up the alley behind the book shops. He got her attention and led her away from whatever was hunting in Black Woods. Willow feels slightly foolish and immensely relieved as she gently places her palm on the flaky paintwork of the Finnis back gate.

There is no sign of the hare now but somehow Willow knows she is right. The gate swings open and sitting calmly in the middle of a moon drenched garden is the mysterious black hare.

It rests on its haunches, using its forepaws to hold each ear as it fastidiously grooms them. Willow slips inside the gate and gasps. She doesn’t think she has ever seen anything more strange and beautiful. It stops grooming its ears and stares back at her, forepaws raised and quivering as if forever poised to run.

‘Paddy?’ Willow whispers, tears filling her eyes as she closes the gate gently behind her. ‘Is it really you?’

The hare tilts its head slightly – a deep amber eye on either side of its narrow skull stare back at her curiously. It stamps one black foot and Willow steps forward.

‘Does that mean yes? Paddy? One thump for yes? Two for no?’

She is smiling as she wipes away her tears and steps closer. She can hardly believe she is talking to a wild animal yet it also seems to make all the sense in the world.

It thumps its foot again just once.

Willow sobs behind her hands. ‘Oh, Paddy!’

She sinks to her knees, weakened by relief and love and grief all at once. The hare lowers its forepaws and crouches, ears flat against its back. Willow lowers one hand and lays it softly upon the creatures head. It feels warm; the black fur like silk. Fresh tears pour down her cheeks as her shoulders shake with soft laughter.

‘Oh Paddy, I’ve missed you. You’ve no idea how much I missed you.’ She sits back on her knees, one hand on his head as her fingers search through the dense fur and she gazes around the garden.

Paddy leaps up suddenly, startling her – He hops casually over to the treehouse. For a moment, Willow wonders if he’s going to somehow climb up, but instead he goes under it, settling onto a patch of what looks like fresh hay. Willow grins and gets to her feet. She ducks under the house and watches Paddy eating the hay. Beside the patch is a bowl with a carrot in, some green lettuce and a cabbage leaf.

She can’t help but giggle. ‘Rabbit food, hey? God, I bet you miss chocolate.’ She kneels beside him, drawn again to the touch of his fine fur. ‘So, your dad knows? That’s what this is? He feeds you and you’re safe here?’

Paddy, still chewing hay, thumps one foot. Yes.

Willow exhales slowly, wiping her cheeks and settling back on her knees again. She feels weak with relief and can’t stop smiling or crying. He’s alive. He’s here. He’s being looked after. She reaches out and lays her hand on his back again.

‘You are so beautiful,’ she sighs. ‘I’m so glad you’re here. So glad you’re okay. I’ve been so worried. All of us. I guess you know that Jesse Archer is one of us now?’ She pauses and he thumps again while calmly nibbling his food. ‘But then you were already friends, hey? Before this happened? I just didn’t realise. And so much has happened… I’m not even sure how much you know. We tried to get the book you had. Oh Paddy, why didn’t you tell me about it? I just don’t understand. I wish you had.’

Paddy continues nibbling, his ears twitching in response to her words. ‘Do you think Iris was trying to tell you something?’ He shifts position but does not thump. ‘She told Jaime she left the book for you but that was it. No explanation. Now she’s dead. Was she on our side, Paddy?’

She watches closely and when he doesn’t thump, she drops her head into her hands in despair. ‘Paddy, you have to meet us. Come to the abandoned church tomorrow after school. Then we can all ask you questions. We might actually get somewhere. Can you do that?’

The hare sits up, nostrils working, sharp eyes fixed on Willow as she looks on in wonder. Finally, he thumps one foot and she relaxes.

‘Oh, thank you, thank you. I’ll tell the others and we’ll be careful. Go separately and arrive at different times. Are we in danger, Paddy? If we keep digging?’

Another long pause; his eyes shift restlessly, ears turning to pick up sound. He thumps once more then returns to his food.

‘I miss you,’ Willow sighs. ‘I miss talking to you and hanging out with you. I miss when it was just you and me against the world. Do you know how we beat them, Paddy? How can we prove what they did to you?’

The hare does not answer. He stretches out his front legs, jaw hanging open in a ginormous yawn that reveal his long teeth, then he stretches his hind legs out, one at a time.

‘Tired?’ Willow laughs. ‘Okay then. Can I get home? That thing in the woods will it come after me?’

He answers with two thumps.

‘No? You’re sure? Was it one of them? Mayfield? Or someone else?’

One thump, yes.

‘Wow, I knew it! Will you be okay? Are you safe from them?’

One thump, yes. Paddy turns around in a circle then lies down, tucking his front paws under him like a cat.

‘You’re perfect.’ Willow plants a kiss on his head and choking back fresh tears, she forces herself up and out from under the treehouse. ‘Tomorrow then? At the church. Night night, Paddy. And thank you.’

Willow walks home slowly – quietened by shock and relief and a hollow sense of loss. The hare is Paddy, she is sure of that, but that doesn’t change the fact that she has still lost her best friend.

She arrives home in a daze having paid no attention to the journey but when she pushes open her own back gate, she stops suddenly, slapping her hands over the scream that emerges from her mouth.

There is a glistening gift for her in the middle of the lawn. A young, fragile roe deer lies on its side, disembowelled, yet still alive – its huge haunted eyes flickering in eternal panic as the warm blood leaks from its open guts, soaking the grass around it.

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Black Hare Valley: Chapter Twenty-Three “Bob Rowan”

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1

Rolling down the hill has unleashed a childishness in all of them. Jesse doesn’t have time to think about it, as an impromptu and undeclared game of tag quickly ensues and he’s suddenly racing at top speed along the riverbank with Willow in hot pursuit.

He’s running fast but not as fast as normal because he is laughing so much, and the more he hears the sound of his own laughter, the funnier it becomes and the harder it is to run. He can feel Willow almost at his elbow and only has a moment to be impressed by her speed, when his foot strikes a clump of thick grass and he flies sprawling onto his front.

He rolls over, slightly winded but still laughing, and suddenly they have surrounded him and he’s being pelted mercilessly with lumps of grass and soil. Roaring with laughter, Jesse rolls away, grabbing at debris and flinging it back at them.

‘You’re it!’ Willow yells and takes off again, streaking along the riverside until she is almost out of sight.

Jesse sprints after her but without much conviction – his feet and legs feel like lead and he can’t catch his breath from laughing too much. Jaime and Ralph overtake him easily, yelling at Willow and giggling at the absurdity of it. Jesse follows, shielding his eyes from the sun with one hand as he spots Willow haring alongside the river. They have moved quite some distance from the ruins, he notices when he looks back over one shoulder.

A huge buzzard circles overhead mewing as it glides and Jesse looks up at its cream underbelly and feels a shudder wring through him. The drink, the weed, the fear, the friendship – they have all wound up tight inside of him and now he feels like he is exploding from the inside. A reckless streak pushes him forward, glaring at the bird until it disappears from view and he hurries after the others and wonders how far they could get as a group if they just kept going.

He glances at the river. He got further than this when he tried to leave town. He made it to the Holloway. Now he stares at the shining water and thinks that if they could just somehow cross the river they would be out of Black Hare Valley. His stomach lurches at the thought but as much as it is terrifying, the thought is also delicious.

Jesse finds the others at the base of the hill. Ralph has been tackled by the girls and is rolling around like a stocky toddler, laughing so hard he can barely breathe. Jesse watches for a moment, hands on hips as he grins at their antics. He has never seen them like this – utterly carefree and silly. He feels sorrow pooling inside of him because he wishes it could always be like this and he feels regret because he should have spent years with kids like this, not kids like Steven.

He thinks about all he has missed out on and sighs. A mewing overhead catches his attention and he sees the buzzard again, gliding in huge smooth circles as it cries out its melancholy song. Jesse walks over to them and they fall apart breathlessly, red-faced, muddied and happy.

He looks up at the hill behind and knows they are on the edge of Rowan Farm. Somewhere further along they’ll find the barbed wire fence with the gap under it. But he turns his attention back to the river. It doesn’t look too deep. Maybe waist high at the most. He licks his lips and edges closer.

Suddenly, Willow is at his side. She’s rubbing her arms and frowning. ‘It feels weird here.’

‘Hey?’

She’s looking around and then up, as the cream-bellied bird of prey continues to circle. Jaime and Ralph plod over and all four of them stare at the river.

‘It feels weird,’ Willow repeats. ‘Cold.’

Jesse pauses and realises that she is right. There is a notable change in the atmosphere – in the air around them – it feels cold and thin and their voices sound strangely small and muffled, yet there is that same fizzing sensation like the one in Margaret’s cellar.

He’s silent for a few moments while he tries to absorb and understand it. Above them the buzzard is still circling and crying out like an injured kitten.

Ralph sighs beside him. ‘Are you thinking about trying to cross it?’ he asks softly, nodding at the river.

Jesse snaps out of his thoughts and looks down at Ralph. ‘Yeah, maybe. What do you guys think? Then we’d be out of here.’

‘It looks freezing,’ say Jaime, anxiously looking between the river and the buzzard. ‘Is that really a border?’

‘Yeah,’ nods Willow. ‘Cross that river on this side and you’re not in Black Hare Valley anymore.’

‘What do you think will happen?’ Now Jaime is looking at Jesse. ‘What do you think they’d do?’

Jesse steps forward, pauses, then steps again. He’s standing on the very edge of the bank – his toes poking out over the mud and just one push or one lean would see him falling in. He breathes slowly, thinking it over and at the same time noticing how cold it suddenly feels around his ankles. He looks down and sees the white mist twisting around his feet. He looks sharply at the others.

‘Do you guys see that?’

They don’t answer and when he looks back, all three of them move back slowly. But they are not staring at him. They’re all staring, frozen, at the hill.

‘There’s someone up there,’ hisses Willow.

Jesse turns sharply and steps away from the river. There is a figure up on the hill, watching them. They’re too far away for Jesse to make out any detail except they seem to be holding onto a walking stick.

‘Bob Rowan,’ he whispers to the others.

They don’t answer but suddenly the buzzard swoops lower and it’s haunting cry seems to fill their skulls. Jesse swears he feels the beat of wings above his head and his instincts tell him to run.

‘Go,’ he says and starts to run.

The others follow close behind and they start fearfully back up the hill towards the safety of the ruins.

2

Bob Rowan stands at the edge of his land and watches the small figures scattering. They look like ants scaling a hill, one slightly in front and the other three close behind. There is a low, pale mist circling above the grass down there and a cream-bellied buzzard, a female, he notes, hovering in the sky. She hangs in the air above the running figures for a moment longer, then swoops upwards, her cries echoing through the hills before she flies off to the right and is gone.

Satisfied, Bob Rowan turns slowly and limps back towards his woods. Bob Rowan grows many things on Rowan Farm; everything he needs to survive up there alone; but mostly he grows trees.

There are circles of trees surrounding his old house: silver birch, ash, beech, hazel, sycamore and oak. Beyond the circles lay arable fields and a small amount of livestock. Unlike Mayor Sumner, Bob Rowan is not interested in making money or owning people. He only grows what he needs.

A dense forest of evergreens provides the final circle: Scots Pine and Douglas Firs, creating a dark thicket, a barrier between his world and the rest. The trees envelope Bob Rowan and a moment later, a large black raven emerges from the treetops and flaps lazily towards the house.

3

From the ruins, they agree to scatter further. Jaime and Ralph decide to track down Nathan Cotton and see what else they can find out about Iris and her family. Willow is going home with the investigation rolled up inside her cloak. It’s her turn to look after it, she says before she leaves, and it’s her turn to try and translate what they have from the book.

Before she scurries off she grabs them each in turn, hugs them tightly and kisses each one of them on the cheek. Then she takes off with grass in her long dark hair. Jesse takes a moment to stash his brother’s tin back in its hiding place, then he leans over to shake the grass and dirt from his hair. He straightens up and grins at Jaime and Ralph.

‘Well, seeing how we can’t get out of here, we better just get on with it, right? I’m gonna go and see my brothers a for a bit, maybe show these pictures to my dad if he’s in. Might see how long I can stay out until the mayor starts hunting me down. Good luck with the Cottons.’

‘You too.’ Jaime manages a weary smile. Then she adds, ‘Let’s do this again some time.’

She means the togetherness and the rolling, and the running and the laughing. She doesn’t mean the strange energy at the riverbank, the thin cold mist or the person watching them from the hill top. She hopes he knows what she means. He fist bumps them both and leaves, hands in pockets as he slouches down the hill towards Taylor Drive.

Ralph dusts himself off and grabs his bike. ‘Okay. Where to first?’

‘The library,’ she replies with certainty. ‘Nathan might be there. I heard him say something the other day about volunteering there a lot.’

‘Miss Spires doesn’t work on Saturdays,’ shrugs Ralph. ‘That’s one thing I learned from living next door to her.’

‘She gives me the creeps,’ Jaime murmurs as they start off down the hill together, veering left towards what they can see of Lupin Lane.

‘Me too. They all do.’ He looks at her. ‘Not your mum though.’

Jaime chuckles, her eyes averted to the ground. ‘Not yet.’

‘Does it bother you? Her being on their committee?’

She releases a short puff of air. ‘I don’t know, I guess that depends. I mean, let’s assume there really is a proper neighbourhood watch committee. I mean, there is one because Mum’s been to a few meetings now and gets on really well with Sylvia Gordon.’

Ralph wrinkles his nose. ‘Really?’

‘Yeah, they seem to be friends,’ Jaime replies. ‘So, I wonder, they might not all be involved. The mayor and Mayfield, Mr Hewlett and Mr Bishop, I’d say yeah. Miss Spires and Miss Gordon, I’m not so sure we have any evidence to suggest they’re on the same level if you know what I mean.’

Ralph nods grimly. ‘Yeah, like maybe some of them are just on a boring old neighbourhood committee and have no clue about the rest of this.’

‘Yeah, exactly. Well, hopefully.’

‘And Iris Cotton and Bob Rowan used to be on it,’ he continues. ‘I never paid attention to any of it until Paddy went missing but you can ask anyone. It’s common knowledge that they used to be once.’

‘Any idea how recently they left?’

‘I think it was a few years ago that Iris left. Bob Rowan, it must be longer. I mostly know of him through rumours. He’s a total recluse these days.’

‘A bit like Iris…’ muses Jaime, swapping a look with Ralph.

‘Yeah, kind of. You think that means something?’

Jaime gives a firm nod. ‘It must do, Ralph. She left that book for Paddy. Maybe because she used to be one of them she knew what was going to happen. She remembered Carol-Anne Radley and the other people from out of town. Maybe she left the committee because of what they do. Then when she tried to warn us, they burned her house down just like they did to Agnes Salter all those centuries ago.’

‘So what do you think that says about Bob Rowan and Iris Cotton then?’

Jaime sighs heavily and flips up her hood as it starts to rain. ‘I think it means they’re both on our side.’

4

Luckily, there is no sign of Steven or Dominic around the blocks on Taylor Drive. Jesse feels a bit like a thief creeping back to the crime scene as he approaches his old home. Or is it still his home? He has no idea, but it gives him a strange and disorientating feeling to be there again. It’s his life, home and everything he knows, yet somehow it isn’t. He feels like a trespasser as he opens the entrance doors and this makes him feel sad.

The smell has not changed in his absence. He sniffs hungrily and finds himself smiling at the ingrained stench of curry, beer, sweat and smoke. There is a broken bag outside the front door – spewing its greasy guts all over the floor and he has to step over it to reach the door.

He wonders who is home; if anyone is; if they miss him; if he’ll ever be able to come back. It all hurts, he notices then – physically, like a heavy punch to the gut that winds you – regret and loss and anger and loneliness.

Jesse opens the door and steps inside.

He can’t smell or hear his father and that is something of a relief. Part of him wants to confront him, have it out, demand to know more about his mother and Carol-Anne, but part of him can’t bear the thought. He’s never been shown love by his father but he doesn’t think he could stand any more outright rejection. Not yet.

Billy and Wyatt are home and they are pleased to see him. They appear in the hallway, slipping arms into coats and slinging bags onto shoulders. Jesse catches sight of their lamping torch inside one of the bags.

‘Hey look, it’s lord of the manor,’ jokes Wyatt, giving him a shove that’s half-friendly and half-not.

Billy’s eyes are gleaming. ‘Hey, so what’s it like up on the hill looking down on us peasants?’

Jesse shrugs and grins. ‘It’s all right. Thought I’d drop by and say hi. Is Dad in?’

The both nod. ‘In his room,’ says Billy. ‘You won’t get any sense out of him. You sure you’re okay with the mayor? I don’t know about her but I don’t trust Mayfield an inch. That guy’s a twisted psycho. Always has been.’

‘Yep,’ Jesse nods. ‘Thanks for the warning but I figured that out myself.’

‘Well, you seem okay.’ Billy’s eyes narrow as he looks him over. ‘You want to join us lamping? I’m putting a hundred on Si’s dog Lunar. That hound can run!’

‘Nah, better not. Just wanted to say hi, and you know, I’m okay.’

‘Okay,’ nods Wyatt, opening the door. ‘We’re meeting in the pub first for a few rounds. Better go.’

Billy slaps Jesse on the shoulder as he passes him. ‘You and your friends, are you still looking for that Paddy kid?’

‘Yeah, we are,’ replies Jesse. ‘But, you know, discreetly.’

His brother looks at him for a long moment and Jesse wonders if he ought to enlighten him – tell him about Mayfield and the mayor and the cellar under the house. He and his brothers have never been close but they’ve tried to look out for each other in their own haphazard way and he knows that when it comes down to it, they would help him if he needed it. But it would be dangerous to let them in, he thinks, dangerous for them all.

‘Don’t lamp near the mayor’s place,’ Jesse calls after them as they leave. They laugh in reply and promise nothing.

He closes the door, takes a deep breath and heads to his father’s room. The door is shut and it sticks when he turns the handle. Jesse puts his shoulder against it and exerts pressure until it pops open and the distinct smell that is his father, wafts out and wrinkles his nose. He taps his knuckles against the wood.

‘Dad?’

There is no reply from the lump under the grubby duvet. Jesse can see his feet hanging out from the bottom. He’s still wearing his boots, the laces trailing against the threadbare carpet. Jesse steps inside. The thin curtains are drawn. They barely keep out the daylight and he can see his father’s dark hair against the pillow as he snores into his arms.

‘Dad?’ he says again, drawing nearer to the bed. He sees how it sags in the middle, how the mattress is bare and stained with vomit and sweat. He sees the debris of his father’s miserable life all around him: broken glass, spilled drinks, crushed cans and overflowing ashtrays. The only decent thing in that desolate room is the photograph of his parents wedding day that still stands on the bedside table.

He goes to it now, crouching beside his father’s sleeping form and gazing into their young happy faces. His mother is pregnant with Billy and holding a bouquet of flowers over her bump in an attempt to disguise it. She’s wearing a cream shift dress and a pretty lace cardigan. Her dark hair is swept up and pinned back at the sides and she wears a dainty tiara on her head. Jesse stares into their faces searching for clues.

His father emits a fart followed by a burp and then lifts his head to cough violently. Jesse sits back, fearing an explosion of vomit, or worse.

‘Dad? You okay? It’s me.’

Nick Archer turns his head slowly. His eyes come into focus and one shaking hand lifts to search his lank hair before gripping his forehead and holding on.

‘Water,’ he rasps. ‘Get me a water, Jess.’

Jesse dashes out of the room, finds a vaguely clean cup and fills it with tap water. He leaps over bundles of rubbish and dirty clothes and makes his way back to his father, who is up on both elbows now, frowning miserably. He mutters a thank you and takes the water, sipping gingerly at first, before gulping it down greedily.

Jesse slips the photos from his pocket and holds them up. He shows them to his dad, one by one, giving him time to run his confused gaze over each one in turn, before moving to the next one.

‘Remember?’

Nick Archer reaches out. He takes the photos and holds them closer to his face. ‘Where’d you get these?’

‘Willow’s mum found them. That’s her in every one, see? She really looks like Willow.’

‘Me.’ Nick Archer squints and pokes a finger. ‘Jesus Christ. So young.’

‘Ralph’s dad,’ nods Jesse. ‘I can’t believe you all hung out together.’

‘Not really,’ Nick mutters, wiping one eye with his thumb. ‘I ran in a different crowd back then.’

‘Troublemakers?’ asks Jesse with a smile.

His dad snorts. ‘Yeah.’

‘Like who?’

Nick scratches the back of his neck. ‘Old Chrissy Burns, you know him. Works at the school now. And Mark Aster. Bit of a prick he was.’

Jesse pauses. This is news to him and he wants to unpick it more, but the mystery of what happened to Carol-Anne is more pressing right now.

‘You all look close in these pictures,’ says Jesse. ‘And look at Mum and her sister, Carol-Anne, she’s the May Queen there. Why didn’t you ever tell me about her, Dad?’

Nick stares at the pictures for a long moment before roughly shoving them back at his son. He drops his head on the pillow and turns onto his side.

‘I forgot.’

‘You forgot about Carol-Anne? You forgot she went missing just like Paddy?’ Jesse tries to keep his voice soft and reasonable. He does not want to accuse his dad of anything. He does not want to anger him.

‘Get me a beer, son.’

Jesse licks his lips. ‘I will in a minute. Did you guys try and look for her, Dad? Back then, when these were taken? Did you try and find her?’

Nick closes his eyes. His face is lined and tired. He has missing teeth and scars. A hard look in his eye one moment and a pathetic one the next. Jesse vaguely remembers him being different, being better. But he doesn’t remember him without the booze.

‘I don’t remember, son. Get me a beer, eh?’

‘So you’ll forget?’ sighs Jesse, standing up. ‘I reckon that’s why you do it, you know. Mum ran away and so did you, only you ran into a bottle. I suppose I should be grateful you at least hung around.’

Defeated, Jesse leaves the room, pulls a can of beer free from the six pack in the fridge and returns to his father with it. Nick sits slowly up, crossing his legs like a child and leaning against the headboard. He opens the beer and sips it with his eyes closed. Jesse takes a moment to look him up and down. He supposes they look alike. The same eyes and hair, the same tall thin build, only Nick has a beer belly and saggy jowls and bloodshot eyes. Jesse resolves then and there never to end up like him.

‘It’s all right, Dad,’ he says then. ‘Maybe you didn’t have a choice. I know about Mayfield and the others. You’ve probably blocked it out and I don’t blame you. But it’s all right. Me and my friends, we won’t give up until we get Paddy back.’

‘You stay away from Mayfield!’ his father barks as Jesse turns away. ‘And the others! That bloody vicar, fuckin kiddy fiddling creep and that bloody sadistic teacher if that’s what he is now! You stay away from them all, you hear me, Jesse?’

Jesse faces him. ‘I need to know what happened to Paddy, Dad. Do you know anything? Anything that can help me? You remember them from back then, don’t you? The committee?’ Jesse steps forward, his hands clasped together, pleading for his dad to give him something. Anything. ‘Did they stop you looking for Carol-Anne?’

Nick lowers his head slowly and covers his face with both hands. Jesse stands and watches his father’s shoulders jerking with each silent sob. He goes to him, cautious but drawn to him all the same. He can feel something in the air between them, a spark of energy, a rising emotion coming off his father that alerts Jesse to danger; to knowledge that he could go either way at any moment, that maybe Jesse has already pushed him too far.

‘Did they stop you?’ he asks again, his hand reaching for Nick’s shoulder slowly.

‘My old man…’ Nick sniffs, dragging his hands down his face, and that’s when his gaze jerks to Jesse and the change happens. ‘Fuckin old bastard, it’s about time I went and danced on his fuckin grave!’ He stands, shakily at first, unfolding his form upon wobbly legs, but Jesse backs off anyway. He’s heard bits and pieces about his late grandfather over the years, none of it good.

Jesse glances at the door and starts to make his retreat. He can feel which way this is about to go and it’s best to get out of the firing line. True to form, Nick lashes out at the nearest thing, which happens to be the rickety bedside table which has been screwed back together so many times, it collapses easily, spilling odd socks and ragged underpants onto the carpet.

Nick roars and sobs and swears and then swipes everything from the dresser. Ashtray, beer cans, takeaway rubbish, it all flies across the room.

‘Fuckin old bastard!’

Jesse slips out and closes the door behind him. He knows there is no reaching his father in that state. Since his mother vanished five years ago, it has been the same thing over and over. Drink, sleep, vomit, scream and rage at his dead father, his missing wife or his useless sons, eventually pass out, and then do it all again tomorrow.

Defeated, he slips the photos into his pocket, and gives the grimy flat a final look before opening the front door. He walks out, straight into the hard, unyielding chest of Sergeant Aaron Mayfield. Instantly, his body heat diminishes; all the warmth seeping out of him to be replaced by the feeling of being drenched in icy water. There is barely any time to react before those forceful, weather-beaten hands have turned him around and wrenched his arms behind his back.

He grunts in pain. ‘What the fuck are you doing?’

Mayfield spins him around and stares at him with cold dead eyes. ‘Little bird told me you tried to skip town again.’

He shakes his head angrily. ‘No I never! You can’t do this!’

Mayfield leans over his shoulder and inhales sharply. ‘Breaking the rules. Trying to leave. And you reek of booze and weed. The mayor is going to be very disappointed in you, Archer.’

Jesse stares at him in dismay. He shakes his hair from his eyes and feels a surge of frustration. ‘Fucks sake,’ he growls, struggling, but it’s no use.

Mayfield opens the door, grabbing his arm. He releases a heavy sigh.

‘What made you come back to this shithole? Look at it. Nothing good can come from a place like this.’ He shifts his gaze and narrows his sharp blue eyes as he drags them up and down Jesse. ‘It doesn’t matter how much she pretties you up, Archer, you’ll never escape the stain of this place.’

With that, Mayfield slams the flat door and marches him down the stairs and outside, towards the waiting patrol car.

‘You break more laws than I do every day,’ Jesse grumbles as Mayfield pushes him into the passenger seat. ‘Where are we going?’

And inside, Jesse is thinking, next time you try this, I’ll be ready and I’m going to get away from you and make you sorry.

Mayfield gets in the other side, slams the door and removes the radio from his top pocket. ‘Let’s ask the boss lady, shall we?’

5

Willow stretches out on her bed with the investigation spread out in front of her. Her parents are both busy in the shop but she has locked her door just in case. She feels a heady mixture of happiness, hope, despair and fear. As always, it’s hard to concentrate with such a cocktail of emotions inside her.

She pictures them from earlier, rolling down that monstrous hill, the earth slamming into them every other second while the sky bore down. Pain and fear and rocketing adrenalin and then the landing, the amazement, the laughing. Willow smiles, remembering them rolling around, clutching their bellies in laughter. She felt a slither of guilt at the time but not now. If Paddy had been watching, he would have been smiling too.

The despair and fear take over whenever she thinks of Paddy. The black hare. It chills her to the bone – takes her breath away, turns her body to solid ice. She sees Jaime’s panicked face and understands it. It’s a horrific thought yet they can’t deny it or hide from it. That’s what they want, she thinks, they want us to give up and every time we get closer to the truth, they put something in our way: a bird, Bob Rowan, a burning house.

Fuck them, she thinks and goes back to translating, fuck you all.

Half an hour later she thinks she has something. Fragments of spells or incantations, maybe, things maybe Iris Cotton was trying to tell Paddy. There is a protective circle spell and another one that stands out. Willow is not sure she has translated it accurately but the gist of it seems to be rebirth and more than that; eternal life.

Shit, she thinks in both fear and triumph, they’re trying to live forever.

6

Ralph and Jaime enter the library attempting to look as innocent as possible. It’s hard to act innocent when you’re as paranoid as they’ve now become. They walk in, heads high, swallowing nervously, both utterly convinced that a black raven has stalked them from the ruins back into town. Even as they lock up Ralph’s bike outside and push through the heavy doors and into the warmth, the raven swoops by on silent dark wings.

Ralph doesn’t voice his suspicions because he can tell that Jaime is having a hard time digesting all this. He supposes he feels the same. He keeps asking himself, what is the evidence? That’s what Scully would be demanding in The X-Files. She never let Mulder get away with suspicions or hunches. Where is the hard evidence? He’s not sure they have anything truly concrete yet and even if they did, what would they do next? Ralph shudders when he considers this – supposing they did get proof, a recorded confession of the mayor or Mayfield admitting they turned Paddy into a hare, what then? Who could they take it to? Who would listen?

Even if they are right and even if they can prove it, what then? What can any of them actually do about it?

It’s warm inside the library and Ralph gestures to the front desk where Nathan Cotton can be seen sorting a pile of books onto a trolley. As they approach side by side, Nathan wheels the trolley out from behind the desk and heads left to the adult section. Jaime leads the way after him and Ralph follows. He’s glad she seems to be taking charge of this particular mission because he really doesn’t have a clue what to say.

‘Hi, Nathan,’ smiles Jaime and he looks over his shoulder, smiling back.

‘Oh hi guys, can I help you with anything?’

‘Just covering for Miss Spires?’ asks Jaime, picking a book up from the trolley and turning it over in her hands.

‘Yeah, just until lunch then I’ve got an afternoon shift at the chemist.’

‘Doesn’t sound like much of a fun Saturday.’

He rests his hands on his hips, nodding and smiling. ‘Ah, it’s okay. I’ve got plans for the evening. You know, pub, friends…’ He shrugs as his face grows red.

‘We just wondered how Iris is,’ Jaime says then, giving a smile of sympathy. ‘It must have been such a shock for her.’

‘Yes, it was.’ Nathan nods grimly. ‘And she’s taken it very hard. Actually,’ he looks around awkwardly. ‘She is sort of missing at the moment.’

Jaime and Ralph swap a wide-eyed look. ‘What?’ breathes Jaime, her voice little more than a croak.

‘Oh, it’s okay,’ Nathan says hurriedly. ‘She does this a lot. My mum says she’s wild at heart, whatever that means. But anyway, she likes to take off sometimes and be on her own. I’m sure she’ll be fine. She always is.’

‘Okay,’ Jaime nods slowly, glancing at Ralph, who raises his eyebrows. ‘Where does she go?’

‘Ah, I dunno, to be honest.’ Nathan starts picking up books from the trolley. ‘Just into the woods or whatever. She’s a real nature lover, you know. Likes to sleep under the stars, that kind of thing. Personally, I think she’s more than just eccentric these days.’ He glances briefly at the ceiling in a ‘what can you do’ kind of gesture. ‘I think it might be dementia.’

‘Well, if we see her, we’ll let you know,’ Jaime says as they turn to leave.

‘Thanks!’ he calls after them cheerily.

Outside, Jaime turns to Ralph. ‘Do you think he could be lying?’

‘No, I don’t think so,’ Ralph shakes his head then looks anxiously across the street. ‘Jaime, it looks like we still have company.’

The huge raven is perched on a litter bin on the other side of the road.

7

Once back at Hill Fort Farm, Sergeant Mayfield quickens his pace. He takes nothing slowly; not the hurtle up the driveway, or the screeching parking of his car.

‘No police station?’ Jesse mutters as he is pulled out of the car and propelled towards the kitchen door.

‘You heard the mayor,’ is the grumbled reply. ‘She isn’t too happy with you.’

‘No one said I couldn’t see my friends or my brothers.’

‘It’s more the trying to escape and consuming illegal substances she’s bothered about actually,’ Mayfield sneers.

‘Bullshit,’ Jesse seethes as he is bundled roughly into the kitchen. There is no sign of the mayor but Hilda is sat blankly at the kitchen table with Horatio beside her. As Jesse stares at her, she picks up a Jaffa cake and throws it at him. It bounces off of his shoulder then Mayfield drags him through to the pantry.

‘Oh no, no way! Not this again!’ Jesse protests, digging his heels into the floor. He’s no match for Mayfield though, who merely encourages him on by jabbing the end of his baton into his spine. ‘Ow! Fuck you! You can’t do this!’

Mayfield ignores him because of course he can, unlocks the cellar door and forces Jesse down into the darkness. At once his anger and frustration switches to fear – it envelopes him entirely from his head to this toes. He is rigid and frozen as Mayfield lights the lantern and forces him into the centre of the darkened space.

Heavy hands push him to his knees and Jesse feels the ground under them is slightly higher than the rest of the floor. It reminds him of the gentle but grim slope of a freshly dug grave and he panics and tries to move but he finds he can’t. Mayfield is not holding on to him anymore but something else is. Something cold and solid and gleeful is holding him in place.

‘What?’ he shouts, staring around. ‘What is it? What is it? I can’t move!’

Mayfield leans over him with a sneering smile. ‘Some time down here will give you an opportunity to think.’

‘Think about what? What is this? I can’t move! What the fuck?’

‘Power, energy, ghosts, magic. You choose,’ Mayfield replies sarcastically. Grimacing down at him. He walks behind him and removes the cuffs. But Jesse still can’t move. It’s like his brain is disconnected from his body. The messages, the signals to move are just not getting through.

Mayfield appears in front of him again, hands on broad hips. Jesse stares back at him, shaking violently, he can hear his own teeth clattering against each other. He wants to scream but he can’t. He wants to beg but he can’t. The energy, the power, whatever it is, it’s inside now as well as out. He’s a prisoner in his own body. Jesse has never spent time thinking about the possibility of Hell existing but now he imagines it must be very much like this.

‘She wants to keep you,’ Mayfield tells him in a slow, almost drowsy voice. ‘She wants to lure you in, train you up, make you one of them – one of us.’ His brow sits heavily over his piercing blue eyes. ‘She does that sometimes, you know. Collects strays. Ask Horatio.’ His top lip rises into a parody of a smile. ‘But me.’ He sniffs. ‘I say she’s wasting her time. It should have been you, not Paddy and I’d have seen you dead by now. I’d have hunted you down. If it was up to me, you’d be just like that one.’ He turns very slowly and jabs a finger towards the pile of bones in the corner of the first cell.

Mayfield leaves suddenly with no word or warning. Jesse has no idea how long he is left alone in the freezing darkness. He is only aware of something cold clutching him in place. He can barely breathe, barely think. And the smell… Like boiled guts and old vomit.

It’s Margaret who comes for him – bizarrely, sighing and rolling her eyes like an inconvenienced mother. She merely grabs his arm and pulls him to his feet and that’s it – the spell, or whatever it was, is broken. Jesse can breathe again. He moves after her, pounding up the steps then dashing across the pantry floor to escape.

‘Excuse me, I’d like a word with you,’ Margaret says in a sulky voice as she closes the pantry door and turns to face him, arms folded.

Jesse stares around the kitchen. It’s like nothing has changed. Hilda and Horatio are still in exactly the same place and position and as he stares, open-mouthed, Hilda picks up another Jaffa cake and lobs it at him again. This time it smacks him on the nose and he utters a bewildered ‘ow!’ before Margaret takes his arm again with an irritated sigh.

‘Hilda! Behave! Come on young man. We need to keep you occupied.’ She marches him outside and around to the other side where the patio lays. There is a shotgun propped against the wall there and she picks it up and cradles it. ‘Pheasant run,’ she snaps. ‘Follow me.’

He stumbles after her because he has no choice and she marches in a severe and frustrated fashion down the slope and into the pheasant copse.

She stops outside the shed and Jesse peers in at the enclosure. A number of birds are strutting about curiously. ‘I didn’t try and escape,’ he says, not looking at her. ‘I was curious about the river but I wasn’t gonna do it.’

‘Liar,’ she replies disdainfully. ‘Go in the shed please. There are a number of birds I’ve cornered in there and they all need dispatching.’

‘Why?’

She shrugs. ‘Old. Frail. Injured. Take a look.’

Jesse opens the door and peers into the dusty darkness. Margaret is at his side and points out a hen lying on her side in the straw. ‘That one, for instance. Do you know how to wring a neck, Jesse?’

He shakes his head miserably. He can’t get over how the bird is looking at him; right at him. There is a pleading look in those eyes. An almost human look.

‘Pick her up,’ commands Margaret.

He obeys, scooping up the brown pheasant hen and resting her tired body in his arms.

‘Well, get on with it then,’ Margaret snaps. ‘We’ve got plenty to keep us busy.’ She looks to her right and spots a huge raven watching them from a tree nearby. ‘Oh, and you can piss off as well!’ she says and raises the rifle.

The raven lifts up instantly, its keen shiny eyes fixed on her as it flaps up onto the pheasant shed.

‘Don’t think I can’t get you up there you miserable bastard!’ Margaret lines up the shot and closes one eye. ‘Jesse Archer, dispatch that bird right now or I’ll have to start considering Aaron is right about you.’

Jesse swallows tightly, grabs the hen by the head, closes his eyes and pulls until he hears a loud crack. She fires a shot but the raven takes off.

‘I couldn’t move in there,’ Jesse tells her desperately. ‘What was it?’

‘No questions.’ She moves away, gun lowered. ‘I’ll decide what you’re ready to know and when. Now get rid of that lot then clean the shed out for me. Should keep you out of trouble for a while.’

He looks on helplessly as Margaret stomps away through the trees and back towards the house. The pheasant suddenly feels like a guilty secret in his arms, so he drops it in disgust, wipes his murderous hands off on his jeans and examines the rest of them.

There are ten females in total. All old, or limping or with obviously damaged wings. No good for egg production; no good for churning out more pheasants for Margaret and her shoots to enjoy killing. Jesse stares at them all in dawning horror that spreads like a chill across his body. If Paddy is a hare and Mayfield could be something else, then what about these birds? His mind spins and his stomach feels queasy as he thinks of the missing people. Did they meet the same strange fate? How is any of it possible?

As if reading his mind or sensing his hesitance, the pheasants turn to look at him one by one. They blink at him slowly and solemnly.

‘I have to do it,’ he croaks. ‘I have to kill you all.’

Jesse realises that there is no way out. Whatever he does or doesn’t do will soon be seen or heard and reported in some way. So he does it. One by one, as quickly as he can, refusing to look into their eyes, he picks each bird up and pulls their necks.

When he emerges from the shed after cleaning it out, he is covered in dust and straw and feathers and he feels like a criminal, like the trees are judging him, like the very landscape itself is staring back at him in horror and pain.

The sky has darkened – low clouds are slung across the horizon and he’s about to head back to the house when he hears the distant bark of a dog. He would recognise that kind of bark anywhere. The bark of an adrenalin-filled sighthound in full flight pursuing its prey.

‘Paddy…’ he whispers, then starts running.

He races through the trees, bursts out of the other side of the copse then charges down a hill towards the thicker woods at the edge of Margaret’s land. He hears the dogs now, more than one, thundering on swift feet, carrying athletic bodies born to run – tearing after their prey.

He shouts and waves his hands at the glimpses of young men he sees between the trees further back. ‘Billy, no! Call them off! Call them off!’

But even Jesse knows hounds like that cannot be called off anything when in full flight. It’s pointless and useless and all the shouting and waving in the world won’t make a difference. Jesse keeps running, crashing and sliding through wet leaves and clawing brambles. He follows the dogs but he can hear Billy gaining on him.

‘What’s your problem?’ he yells from behind.

It’s too much to explain so Jesse doesn’t even try. He just runs faster. He can see the dogs now – three of them, two sandy coloured and one brindle, racing at top speed after a madly zig-zagging creature. Please don’t be Paddy, he begs, please, please, please.

Finally, he hears it. The dogs catching up with the creature. Barking, yipping, snarling, tearing and amidst it all, screaming.

‘No!’ Jesse surges forward.

‘Christ sake, Jesse!’ Billy is thundering up behind him.

Jesse gets there first. He runs up to find the three dogs standing back, panting heavily as their deep chests rise and fall, proud of the chase and the kill but not interested in eating it.

Billy shoulders past Jesse and whoops in delight as he picks the mangled creature up by one long ear and examines it in utter delight.

‘Oh my fucking god, a white one! Wyatt! Look at this! Jesse, can you believe this shit?’

Jesse stares in horror at the white hare’s bloodstained fur and its empty staring eyes. ‘Billy, what have you done?’


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